[Denied]Crymsonblade's Application

[C-Blade 0]

[Princeton 396]

 

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- Unfortunately, I am going to have to deny this -

 

Firstly, you need to have both definitions before you reapply. They are both essential too RP and can be found on the internet; don't plagiarize.

 

Secondly, your biography was pretty short and contained little to no lOTC lore. I advise searching the wiki to find new places and information on elves. Also, explain why an orc raiding party was in the elven lands in the first place. Just flesh out your application a little more with more information.

 

Lastly, your ORQ's were short and lacked dialogue and detailed actions. In your ORQ's, please add detailed actions with dialogue to truly paint the situation as your character. Refer to an implemented application for an example; don't plagiarize!

 

Please wait 24 hours after this post to reapply. Feel free to PM me questions or concerns!

[Princeton 396]

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