[Denied]Kashe Qu's Fourth Application

[SGTliger 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

 

 

Please fill out the

following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details

are accurate.




 

 

Minecraft Account Name: SGTliger




 

 

How old are you?:  14

 

 

 

Time-Zone: Mountain

 

 

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes I
have read the rules twice.

 

 

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I’ve
played on 5-6 roleplaying

servers, sadly most of these discontinued in 5-6 weeks of roleplaying.

 

 

 

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: From the
Minecraft forums of course.

 

 

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the
server: 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/89509-my-application-sgtliger/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/89585-my-second-application-sgtliger/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/89509-my-application-sgtliger/

 

 

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft
Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes I have.

 

 

 

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you
make use of it and follow it in your

biography?: Yes I have.

 

 

 

Definitions

 

 

 

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take
any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Acting out a part you aren’t, such as an elf,
orc, or other mythical creatures. Usually involves a made-up character that you
‘roleplay’ as.




 

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when you know something that you're not supposed to know, maybe someone told you over skype or something. Say mutty the orc was going to betray Kashe the Human. One of Kashe's friends told him over skype that Mutty was going to kill Kashe. Kashe then kills mutty for no apparent reason, or at least claims that he was 'suspicious'.

 

 

Power-emoting: When you say something like *Kashe stabs Fark* then Fark says *Fark dodges Kashe and stabs him with a stick impaling his heart and killing Kashe instantly* Fark using a power emote, which isn't allowed because impaling someone with a stick is nearly impossible. Or such as *Kashe kills everyone in the room by saying hello*. Could be used by anyone, such as a guard or some sort. Or just forcing an action upon somebody.

 

 

 

 

 

In-Character

Information:

 

 

 

Complete the following biography on your character

 

 


 

 

Full Name: Kashe Qu

 

 

 

Current Age: 18

 

 

 

Sub-race (if any): N/A

 

 

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+
paragraphs long):

 

Kashe was born in Abresi, he lived in a small house, with
not many belongings. Kashe’s father died when Kashe was only two due to the
plague. Kashe’s mother raised him for eight years alone.

 

When Kashe was only  4 years of age his family
lost all of their money and belongings to a thief, they were forced to
live out on the streets. He suffered many sicknesses and hardships on the
streets. In these hard times, Kashe's mother resorted to prostitution for
the extra money. But there was one thing that changed all of these things,
a young boy named Matheus.

 

It was a stormy night when Kashe was sitting on the streets,
not doing anything. Just thinking, thinking about his family, and life. Then a
boy about his age walked past him, the boy stared at Kashe for a few moments
and not long after said curiously, “Hey, are you hungry?”

 

Kashe nodded almost immediately, the boy handed him a loaf
of bread. Matheus sat down next to Kashe and started up a conversation.

 

“So what’s your name?”

 

With his mouth full of bread Kashe replied, “Kashe… Kashe
Qu.”

 

“Well Kashe Qu, it’s awfully cold tonight how about you come
by my place for the night?”

 

Kashe looked up at Matheus with joyful eyes. From that day
on, Kashe and Matheus were best friends.




 

 

Kashe and Matheus grew together like brothers, they did
everything together. Kashe and Matheus were looking forward to one particular
thing, Matheus’ birthday party. 6 months later, it was Matheus’ birthday party.
Kashe and Matheus were having the time of their lives, lots of friends were
over and even some adults. Matheus’ mother told Kashe and Matheus to fetch some
wine and water for the guests. When they came back everything was wrong. They
walked into the door, everyone was dead. Blood was all over the place. Matheus
knelt down next to his parents and began weeping. Kashe put an arm around him.
Matheus then said.


 

 

“Kashe… lets make a promise”

 

 

 

Kashe replied “A promise…? What kind of promise?”

 

 

 

“A promise that when we meet again we will both be
strong… so none of these things will ever happen, and when they do… we’ll
be strong about it.

 

 

 

Kashe begin to slowly cry. Realizing his parents were
dead as well. He walked towards them. Then

replied saying,

 

“When we meet again? What do you mean when we meet again?
I will always be with you.”

 

 

 

“For now, we go our separate ways” Matheus chokes, “And
try our best to fulfill our promises. Besides if I have you I won’t be
able to become strong.”


 

 

 

 

Kashe felt an ache in his heart. So great he couldn’t
bear it, he began to weep, so loud the whole

city could hear it. But finally after a few minutes of crying. He got up,
and embraced Matheus, he then walked away turned back. Matheus waved back,
bright red cheeks, and tear eyes. And shouted, “Farewell brother!”

 

 

 

 

 

 Kashe was impacted by this forever. He was turned into
a street urchin, left on the streets to fend for himself, until one day a man
came. The man quickly struck a conversation with Kashe.

 

“Hello there. You look like someone I’ve heard of”

 

Kashe looks up, and stares at the man.

 

 

 

Stopped the awkward silence the man replies with “I’m Vex
Tung, I’ve been told of your story. How your parents died, and I decided to come
here… to… save you.”

 

 

 

Kashe dropped his gaze again and stared at his hands.

 

 

 

“Why would anyone want me in their home?! I filthy street
urchin?”

 

 

 

“Because Kashe, you’re a special young man. You’ve encountered
one of the most challenging things in the whole world. Losing your parents at a
young age. I’m here to help you heal that wound.”

 

 

 

“Well then who are you?”

 

 

 

“Vex Tung.”

 

Kashe walked away with the man. They  lived together for 7 years until Vex died at a
young age. He left Kashe all of his belongings including his house. Kashe lived
there for the year. He then decided it was time for an adventure. Time to find
his friend.

 

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: Meeting up with his childhood
friend Matheus, and to fulfill his promise with him, to be strong no matter
what happens. Maybe even join a knighthood, or create one.’

 

 

 

 

 

Personality: You could say Kashe isn’t the brightest
person to be around, not having his parents around for half of his life has
definitely had a large impact on him. He hasn’t learned most of life’s lessons,
and isn’t the best with social skills. Although troubled in social skills he’s
great working with himself or people he has been close with for a long time.

 

 

 

Skills: Kashe is greatly skilled in the arts of the Ax.
Being taught by Vex Tung greatly increased his

skill. Kashe is very skilled at being stealthy as well. He has forbidden
himself to pickpocket or steal, but it does come in handy.




 

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your
skin): http://oi43.tinypic.com/2uy66qc.jpg


 

 

Tan, short dark hair.


 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your
character:


 

 

Kashe is rather a strange person, he doesn’t respect
your privacy, is blunt, and is just

different to be around. He might be mean at first, you just need to get to know

him.

 

 

 

Open-Response-Questions

 

 

 

Each question in this section must be

answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full.
Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any
point.

 

 

 

___

 

 

 

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a
dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he
is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do
you do?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer: I sprint towards the guards, and tell them about the
man.

 

Kashe: “Excuse me guards, but do you see that man in the
black?”

 

Guards: *Nods*

 

Kashe: “I believe he’s trying to assassinate the emperor, or
anyone.”

 

Guards: “Civilian, we’ll take care of this. Thank you for
the information.”

 

Kashe then walks away and looks back towards the black
figure. The guards are running his way. The black figure also begins running.
Kashe decides to disobey the guards orders and also try chasing him down. But
fortunately the guards are able to take down the black figure.  The black figure takes out a knife and stabs
one of the guards. The other guard jumps back and gets his longsword out. He
shouts  Guard: “By the name of the
Empire, you are under arrest!”

 

The Black Figure then stabs toward the guard but the guard
easily dodges, and cuts his arm off. 




 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a
large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an
unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed
bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour
and an iron ax, how do you react? (I changed it to an ax to make it fit my
roleplaying

character, I hope that’s okay)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer: I run towards the old man, hoping to aid him in this
great time of need. As I near the bandits back I shout at them,

 

“Filthy bandits, stealing from an old man are we?”

 

“Easy pickings.”

 

“You’re done stealing from this old man.”

 

I take my ax out and hold it at battle stance, ready for
anything to happen. Immediately the two bandits began to swing at me, first the bandit to the right swings for my legs, I jump out of the way. The other bandit swings at my shoulder, I hardly parry it. This goes on for quite a while, and Kashe is getting very very tired. He blocks an attack and almost drops his heavy ax. Then the old man brings his little iron sword out. he slices at the bandits legs. The bandits both fall on the ground, and Kashe stabs them both.

 

The old man then thanks Kashe, "Thank you adventurer, I would've been dead without you".

 

"Don't worry about it old man, you did most of the work."

 

Kashe walks away.

 

 

 

 

 

3. You are standing within the

mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful
stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of

general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has
no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do
you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that
happens).

 

Kashe walks up to the man and starts browsing his wares in silence. He finds an iron ax.

 

Kashe: “How much for the Iron Ax?”

 

 

 

Merchant: “300 Minas.”

 

 

 

Kashe: “I’ll take it for 150.”

 

Merchant: “That’s nearly half off!?!”

 

 

 

Kashe: “But I only have 150 Minas”

 

Merchant: “But that cost me 200 Minas to make! I’d be losing
50 Minas me boy.”

 

 

 

Kashe: “If you want my business you’ll let me buy it for 150
Minas.”

 

Merchant: “Fine, 150 Minas, but this is the only deal I’m
making you!”

 

Thanks for reviewing my application.
 

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Your ORQs are still rather short. It doesn't seem like you took much time to expand on them, only added a sentence or two for each one. I really advise that you put a lot of detail into this portion of the application as it gives us a very good picture of how you show yourself in a roleplay situation before you are even on the server. Your first two are an acceptable length but your third one definitely needs to be expanded on.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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