[Denied][Human]Gigirocker1

[Asarog 9]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.
Minecraft Account Name:
Gigirocker1

How old are you?:

10

Time-Zone:

North America Eastern Time Zone

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:
Yes I have and I have read over each one ten times.

 

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:
A lot of RP servers but most of the are minecraft instead of runescape.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:
I found it searching on the internet.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
 

http://www.minecraft.../page__st__2700


Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): I have posted on the Minecraft Forum.

 Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Role-playing is like acting. You play a role you were given. So, you will always stay in character.

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is abusing the power you have out of character. Like, if you find out that someone is raiding your town and you found it out out of character, and you use it in character.
Power-emoting: Power-emoting is the action of overpowering someone. Like, if you just take a sword from someone and say you stabbed them in the chest. They didn't even get the chance to react! 


In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:
Gondor Fenagund

Current Age:  25

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

   

Gondor was born in a stone house, as the name implies. Gondor thought he was an elf, not a human. One day he found the signs that he was a human. He spent most of his years asking his father questions, but his father would never answer. He told him a story, about his mother dying at birth, and Gondor shut up. But, soon, he started babbling to his father again. He soon smacked Gondor across the face. When he was 17, he ran away, and never turned back. He lived the rest of his life on the road, and tried to stay strong. He started lifting heavy things, and helping. Now, he spends his life on the road trying to do what he can. Now, he is on his on.

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: He wants to have a good future. He would like to be the strongest adventurer to live. He would be known for bravery and nothing else but bravery. He wants to have a wife and kids, and they would love him. He knows it will never come true for how he lives. He is a slob, but kind of nice, and he likes to joke. So he would like to have the best life a man could ever have. He also plans to be rich, and live in a big house with just him, and his family.


Personality:
Gondor is funny, and happy. But sometimes he gets angry because people would annoy him. He likes to charm people, and tell them stories of the things he did. He doesn't like it when people overpower him, but he would put himself in for anyone. He wants to be known as someone. So, he acts serious sometimes. But most of the time he is happy. He also loves kids. If he sees a kid he has to go over to him or her and talk to him or her. He likes to charm people so he acts all,"I'm nice and fun, marry me!"

Skills:  He is a very great swordsman, but not that strong compared to everyone else. He would pick up a medium sized sword and he would use it as a weapon. Every week he would just throw it away or just ruin it. He is very good at agility. He can do a back flip and a front flip. He can also jump high, but not a lot. So he is good at agility and good with swords.
 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):    

 

 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: No, I do not have any other details about my character.
 

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe theevent in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
____

1.
As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering
and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves
are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?


Answer: I go up to them and say,"Excuse me, please do not mock him, he is just a child. If you want to mock someone then go mock yourselves for your foolish behavior! If anyone is the child you are acting like one." And I would walk away.

 

2.
Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old
man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the
ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold
coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the
pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?


Answer: I would gather up the coins and put them back in the pouch. I would then help the old man up and I would say,"Are you alright? Quite a fall for an old man like yourself. Here let me help you." And I would then give the pouch to the man.

 

3.
Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing
in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and
calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his
carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to
haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item,
haggling for prices and the discussion involved).


Answer: I would say,"Oh, you sell everything do you? Well, then I would like a um. G-g.. D.. no.. Um.. WAIT! I know! One gold bar." The trader would say,"Well, you will get it. How much do you think you can give me for it." I say,"Well, how about a price of fifty gold coins!" He would say,"No, how about seventy." I would say,"Well I won't take a price above seventy." The trader would say,"Find, how do you like sixty coins?" I would say,"Ok. You have a deal!" I would shake hands with him and smile. I would walk away with my gold bar and praise that I have.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

I'd like to see you add more lore to the bio. Instead of just saying he was born in a stone house try to list an actual city that Lord of the Craft has. You can find all the lore you need to write your biography under the gameplay tab above.

 

I like that you have described your character with a good amount of detail. This is very important when you begin roleplaying.

 

Add an actual screenshot of your skin instead of the pixel'd layout version you have. You can use this thread to help: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

 

Add more to your ORQs. That includes more unique emotes and dialogue. You have a good idea, just expand on it.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

 

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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