[Denied]My New And Improved Character

[JoyfulHater 0]

Name: Luna

Age: 18

Eyes: Red

Hair: Jet Black

Race(s): High Elf

Weapon: Just her bow and arrow

Story on her life: Luna was always an orphan and was raised by a horrible orphanage. There she learned to be seen and not heard. She is against racism in anyway, great with children, and wishes to be free from "The Nightmare" called her home. Why, you wonder? Let me explain about Mrs. Punch:

Mrs. Punch's nose was as long as a new, sharpened pencil, with her teeth matching the same color as the paint on the wood of one. She was strict and racist, going on about how pathetic Human's were. She always dressed in dark blue and was as tall as a giraffes neck. Her ears were long and pointed until the tip of her head. Her glass were arched with gold, and she HATED Luna.

One day, Mrs. Punch was handing out tests when she saw that Luna was daydreaming out the window. Mrs. Punch smiled wickedly and scurried silently over to her desk. She grabbed one of her rulers that gave serious splinters and quietly dashed to Luna's desk, her smile widening. Raising up her ruler, she giggled and slapped at Luna's hands. Luna leapt in pain and stared with tears in her eyes at the new open cut she just got. "I will have no daydreaming in my class!" hollered Mrs. Punch. The rest of the students, who were watching the whole time, turned pale and returned to their work. Luna look down at her cut, which was now bleeding. "Go to your dormitory and bandage that wound!" said Mrs. Punch, pointing to the door.

Another reason was because of the gardener, Jacob.  He was raised on a farm far away from the orphanage and was very handsome. This caused Luna to fall deeply in-love with him. Except that he was 23 did not matter, only that there was a small possibility that he loved her back. The problem was, Jacob was a Gnome, not an Elf. So when Luna figured out, she was devastated. I know she said she wasn't at all racist, but, he was a prisoner at the orphanage and didn't want to make anything else horrible happen to him.

The last reason was because of her room-mate, Cristy. Cristy was Luna's best friend, and that was the problem. Since Luna wanted to escape, she couldn't, just because she was stuck being Cristy's friend. Why couldn't Cristy come along in the escape was because Cristy... Cristy was always a touchy subject. She always loved the opposite of what Luna loved and so that always put them in a fight. If they were together on escaping, they would probably always fight on running East or running West. Also, Cristy would never steal. In fact, she would and never did anything bad. So that was another problem that Luna didn't want to deal with.

At last came the day Luna disappeared from the orphanage. She moved to Normandor, Malinor and wants to find a job being a builder.

 

-Cupcake1

[everblue2er101 906]

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
[i]Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.[/i]

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[b]In-Character Information:[/b]
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[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?[/b]

Answer:

[b]2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?[/b]

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[b]3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).[/b]

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[everblue2er101 906]

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