[Denied](Elf) Zeus4365 Application #2

[Zeus4365 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:Zeus4365
How old are you?:13
Time-Zone:PST
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Played WOW and other MC RPG servers
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Youtube
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/91110-elf-zeus4365/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting as if you are a particular fictional character
Meta-gaming: Knowing certain advantages the character should not know, but the player does
Power-emoting:When a player pvp's and the target has no chance of changing  the outcome ,"Fred was killed by Bob" compared to "Bob tried to shoot Fred"
 
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Guldurdor
Current Age: 347
Sub-race (if any): High Elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
                     
                 I was born in raised by a family of commoners in Aegis. My childhood was prosperous, I was taught how to read and write in school, fend for myself in the wild, and construct great shrines for Malin. When I became of age I was sent to a master artisan where I learned the way of the brush. No more then several months after being enrolled I was drafted for the military.
                 I was now fighting for not only my life, but my rights to support my true father, Malin. It was agonizing, family and friends alike were gone in an instant, all I remember was the horrible crack of the lightning. Friends were lost, cities were lost, but not anyones faith in Malin. We continued fighting until the end, when we finally subdued the beasts from the darkest's pits of Hell!
                 Now that the war was over, I chose to continue my studies, but in a new city, free from the horrible memories of pain. So I left and headed of to the fair city of Leumalin. It was there I found something I had no intention of finding. The love of my life, "Her name was Claudia." She was a wood elf although that was not stop me. I married her following her customs, not long after our marriage we had two beautiful children. Now I travel the lands selling my wares with my children, hoping that the monsters in hell, never escape to see sunlight again. I am Guldurdor!
 
Ambitions for the Future: To finally settle down and find a home my family can live in.
Personality: Guldurdor is kindhearted and gentle to all he meets unless they wish to do wrong to his family, otherwise he will tear his enemies from limb to limb.
Skills: He uses his excellent precision with his bow to track down animals and cook them up for some very appetizing meals.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Any other details you wish to share about your character: No thx

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of older elves are mocking a small elven child. How do you react?

Answer:

 
I approach the elves and learn they are mocking the child for her poor athletic abilities. The child is surrounded and whines to be released. The elders simply say, "no," and continue to laugh. I was burning up on the inside, no more then several seconds later I pushed my way through the elves and walked the child away. I looked back into the dark forest and, began to ran with the child she made it home, but I didn't. As I walked through the back alleys on the way home, to my family I once again encountered the older elves. We fought, blood was spilled, skin was split, and bones were cracked. It was over, some sentinels heard the brawl and came and executed the brawlers on the spot then escorted me to the hospital.
 
2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer:
 
I see the gold and the old man. He was no supporter of the undead, and neither was I. So, I did what any law abiding citizen would do, I helped him to his feet. Then I asked him if that was his gold sprawled out on the ground. He replied, "Yes." I picked up the gold and handed it back to the old man, all the while I wondered what would of happened if my dark side put me over the edge. I could've become the very thing I vowed to destroy, "Evil!"
 
3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:
 
"Everything?" I said. "Yes why I have everything from clothes, to weapons, and even family heirlooms." "Weapons," I said. "Yes weapons, and some of the finest bows around," the trader said. "What kinds of bows?" I said. "Many, I even have one of our great fathers bow's Malin, and it even has his mark to prove its authenticity," said the trader. "I knew I wanted it immediately so I offered him 300 for it." I said. "What do you take me for, a fool, 400," said the trader. I offered him 330 and he laughed and said, "370, that's my final offer." I knew I could push him a little more so I said, "350," and he reluctantly agreed. I said, "Thank you and left his presence," secretly I could be no happier then I was now.

[Princeton 396]

-Under Review-

[Lita 677]

Claimed.

1. Please work on your definitions. Powergaming and metagaming especially need some work, and powergaming isn't completely correct.
2. Please explain how your character traversed from Asulon to Kalos/Elysium, to Anthos, where we currently are now, in your biography.

All in all, not that bad. Give it another go in 24 hours from this edit, and then we'll see. PM me if you have any questions or concerns.

[Lita 677]

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