[Denied][Orc] Orgrim Ironfist

[z3m0s 1957]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: Crusher32

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone: UTC

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: many many roleplay servers and small fantasy/medieval books for school projects.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I stumbled across it when searching for an RP server to play.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/91150-orc-ogrin-stonebreaker/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: Role-playing is acting/playing as a character performing with what your character would do not yourself

Meta-gaming:Using information you no but your character does not to roleplay or make dicussions

Power-gaming: is forcing an emote on someone not giving them a chance to counter to react for instance *kills bob* which is force emoting so u would have to say *try's to stab bob* for example

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Orgrim Ironfist

Current Age:76

Past / History: I was raised by an elder by the name of grommok from my the lur clan from birth, from what i am told my father died in a war-band raid on a village that they thought would be defenseless but had some human soldiers stopped to rest there,my mother was banished from the lur clan for killing an orc who abandoned the warband that my father was slaughtered in.

 

at the age of 50 Grommak i guess thought Orgrim would challenge him and thought he would challenge me first, i was quite nervous sure he was old but still very strong, i was extremely lucky as to disarm him which usually means defeat and death for the other opponent, but Orgrim was not done he threw his weapon into a corner and proceeded to fist fight Grommak, leaving grommak defenseless the first few hits for he was surprised at what Orgrim had done, as the fight got further in it was clear that Grommak was getting tired and Orgrim just proceeded to blocking his attack's and wearing him down till he was at the point of exhaustion that he could not throw a punch, which was when Orgrim struck up such a rage he punched Grommak in the chest so hard his chest was crushed leaving all his ribs near grinded into dust and his organs squashed bringing Orgrim to be called from then on Orgrim Ironfist, but none the less it had to be done for Orgrim new he would not have been shown mercy by Grommak. It was from then on he was respected by many an orc and earn't himself a kind of self given higher rank to the normal orcs.

 

Ambitions for the Future:I wish to travel and learn about all races, and take the best of all the traditions and return to my Orc brothers and sisters to create an impenetrably strong community with little to no weakness's. 

 

Personality: Orgrim is as most orcs, he is short tempered but unlike some orcs, he has unteachable respect for those who stand up to him and would fight rather then cower in fear for that is true Orc courage,meaning that if u wished to fight him you were shown respect by him which is why so many of his "friends" if you will, had very much of a love/hate relationship for Orgrim.

 

Skills: Orgrim is quite good at climbing very very good at sharpening weapons but only basic weapon crafting he can also read and write which he is quite proud of for not many Orcs can he is able to hold large amounts of liquor as usual for Orcs, he can skin animals making basic clothing and meals even make shift bone weapons he can read and write in human tongue and orcish and also speak in human tongue as well as blah and can just barely swim.

 

Appearance: 7 foot 2 280 lbs no head or facial hair, very muscular build, lite green skin,to the larger side ears a massive jaw, blood red eyes only usually wearing hes favorite torn leather shorts.

(sorry but i couldn't get the skin to show up but here's a link to it hope its okay) http://minecraft.novaskin.me/skin/9897025/Orc-Berserker

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: no

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

 

Answer:*approach orc* "what say you Orc how did you come to be?" "I do not wish to be civilized but i would be for ever in your favor to learn the knowledge of the people you live with" "and i would spare your life"

 

2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

 

Answer: *let out great yell* "yub,yuuubbb, kill twiggies greab ur lusks nd zults, nd us gao nd burn doen da twiggies bobhosh blarg's ntil all flat *gather Orcs and set out to elf camp* *rush in and slaughter all guards* "brothas! doent flat dem arl us need for zacrifizez teak caeptievs *carry back elf's for sacrifice* "eeerrr"!! us got twiggies for zacrifize *bow*

 

3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?

 

Answer:*walks over and headbuts orc to show dominance* "brudda tis not goad, da halfing *spits* teriable mi not ate dat *grabs halfling and throws into bush's* ear lat eat dis, dis goad *hands venision* *young Orc looks puzzled* eat! eat! *young orc eats venision* *young orc smiles* "arrrr it good yub! *young orc agrees* *grunt* "doent eat dat noe moar lat eat dis u flat aniamal end cook, year!" *young orc nods* "goed goed!, "mi leve now brudda Gug'ye" *walks off* 

 

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Orcs cannot speak the Common tongue due to their tusks.

Please expand on at least the first Open Response Question.

There are some spelling and grammar errors throughout.


Much better than your last attempt, but still needs some fixes.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

[everblue2er101 906]

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