[Denied](Dwarf) Rpgman17's Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: RPGman17

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone: EST

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Some, a few servers and games (some were LOTR)

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The Internet

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: N/A

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes!

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Ofcourse!

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Where you take the role of a character and play a game etc. acting like that character using different personalities

Meta-gaming: The use of strategy (I think, sorry if I am wrong)

Power-emoting: When you take power over everyone and make your self really powerful

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Tebur "Great axe"

Current Age: 73

Sub-race (if any): Mountain Dwarf

Clan (if any): N/A

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Tebur grew up living in the great mountain areas. During his childhood he mover around a lot with his father from mountain to mountain. He was taught many skills, how to fight, how to survive. Tebur loved his life, he was happy and love traveling and seeing the land. One day when Tebur was older his father was slain by a group of orcs, Tebur barley escaped with his life, the only thing Tebur has left of his father now is his axe, a beautiful axe hand made by his father. Tebur trained and trained and during his growing up years he swore that he would bring justice to the orcs. Tebur was given the nickname "Great axe" because he was know throughout his people as one of the best axe fighters in the mountains.

Ambitions for the Future: To have his revenge on the orcs

Personality: Calm, smart, fierce fighter

Skills: Fighting, survival, navigation

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): I did this application on mobile so I can't get an in game pic but here is the link (hope this is okay) http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/2423/geek-fox/

Any other details you wish to share about your character: None

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: Tebur studies the bridge, carefully, looking for faults. He first puts his right foot down on the bridge pushing, a few small stones break away and fall into the depths below. Tebur eyes a few vines to his left. He picks them up tugging on them. These particular vines feel sturdy, he collects some more tying them to him self then to a large rock behind him. He slowly shimmies across the

bridge. He almost makes it there when the bridge his way, the vines save his life and he is able to make it back safely but he leaves the diamonds to look elsewhere.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: Tebur quickly jumps up spilling some of his ale. He reaches for his axe holding it I front if him "If you want to touch this lad then you gotta' come through me first" the attackers look surprised. "Lower that knife, nobody wants to get hurt here now do they?" Tebur says. The attacker lowers his knife for has heard the story's of Tebur. The young dwarf thanks him and they leave the tavern together.

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: Tebur looks at the dwarf in suspicion. He actually does not look like a dwarf, the beard looking fake Tubur raises his axe. Slowly walking forward. That voice sounded like an orcs. But he could be wrong, although why would a bar owner be running around in a cave handing out ale? So Tebur quickly grabs the look alike putting him in a headlock. He is in fact an cave goblin with a fake beard. Wondering how a cave goblin got a fake beard made him worried. Tebur despises of the fake and goes up top to warn the others and get him some real ale.

THERE IT IS! HOPE TO HERE FROM YOU SOON!

[everblue2er101 906]

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Incorrect Meta-gaming definition. Expand slightly on Power-emoting or add an example. More information can be found on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Expand upon and make the bio at least two paragraphs. Please include server lore such as events, dates or places, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Explain in the bio how he learned his skills.

The skin supplied has been used many times before on the server. Either find another or alter it. Include a description of appearance along with the skin.

Expand on at least the second Open Response Question.

Add dialogue to the third ORQ.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

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