[Denied]Alternate Account

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]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: B3ast_mod

Alternate Account Name:

Gederp

How old are you?: 15
Time-Zone: Philippines
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Played in Some RP servers, sadly they are all dead/shut down
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The ancient scrolls of Googe'l (Google)
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: [link]
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): None
Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting as if you are one with your character.This is the most basic skill needed to play in a role play server, for example. You want to say to another player that you want some bread, instead of just simply saying that you want some bread, you use your characters name and a sort of "dialect" in chatting with the other player according to your race etc.
Meta-gaming: It is giving your character knowledge that only the player should know about, for example, the player knows another player in real life. And that player told him where his house is located. Your character should not be able to know this unless another player told him/her where it is, or by locating it by chance.
Power-emoting: For me,its not giving your opponent a chance of beating you, it is because you either did not give them a chance to respond, or what you did was simply to OP. For example, you cannot simply say, *runs to the dragon then cuts its head off*, it is because you did not give the person roleplaying the dragon a chance to respond. It should be, *runs to the dragon and prepares to strike* so you will give a chance to the other player to respond to you action.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Súrion Orodreth
Current Age: 507
Sub-race (if any): High elf
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Surion Orodreth was born in a very wealthy family, rich, esteemed and everyone had high expectations of him. He grew up being trained by expert swords men, and trained in the art of archery, and studied under alchemists. The boy's Parents had expected him to be involved in politics when he grew up.
Surion had what every boy would have wanted, Money, a family, and servants, but he lacks one thing that every normal child his age had. Freedom to choose his destiny.
 

  Because of this, Surion grew up to be a rebel, and saw politics as a waste of time. Growing up in the capital city of Malinor, he lived in luxury and had no worries. This made Surion's denial of the government even bigger, seeing the weasels and rats of society become politicians and slowly corrupt the government. When he was old enough, his relatives had forced him to be involved in politics. Soon, he was elected as the assistant of the Medi'iran of the city. He stayed in this position for 6 long years, and in these years he had gathered enough evidence to prove that the government was corrupted and unworthy of their positions. From lies and broken promises, to assassinations and mass murders, he kept these secrets for 6 years and he was ready to let the citizens know.
 

   The night before he was to tell these secrets, he informed his most trusted friend and relative. His brother, Mak'thul Orodeth. They met at the town square and went to a near by tavern. Before they reached the tavern Surion had noticed someone following them. He then told his brother to keep up with him, and his brothers response was "Keep up with you in what way?" at that moment, Mak'thul had noticed the strange men following them, and he followed his brother. As they were running they heard shouts from nearby guards instructing to close all exits. The two brothers went through alleys , around houses, and climbed some walls leading to a dead end. As they were losing hope, Surion spotted a small hole, large enough for one man to pass through, seeing this, his brother told him to go first and said that he will follow. As Surion crawls through the hole he hears the guards coming closer and closer, until he heard his brother shout these words "Go brother! Escape! Do not let them find you!". With this, Surion crawled so fast that by the time the guards voices had faded away, he had reached the exit of the small tunnel. As he stands up, and looks at the wall of the great city he hears a twig break behind him, as he turns around, his expression turned from tired, to seemingly lifeless as he sees a a group of heavily armed elves lead by a familiar face. El'thero, the man that he had insulted by pointing out his schemes to steal the citiy's wealth , before his head was covered by a bag, he sees a small grin on El'thero's face.As the bag was removed he saw himself chained to a steal chair in front of the Maheral and Sohaer. Then he heard a voice say "Let the trial on the cases of Surion Orodeth and Mak'thul Orodeth begin!". and as some light was shed on the room. he saw next to him. his brother bruised and beaten. Before he could react, the mysterious voice said "Under the law of the city, No treason shall be committed against the government of Malinor, or the ones who break the said rules would be persecuted and judged under the eyes of the Maheral and Sohaer!". Then the Sohaer speaks "As the mastermind of the said treason, *Surion's eyes widen up* Makthul Orodeth shall be Executed!- NO! I am the master mind not him!" interupted Surion."SIlence!" said the mysterious voice. "Ehem, and as an accomplice, Surion Orodeth shall be banished from the city, and stripped of his Wealth and rights as a citizen of Malinor!" continued the Sohaer. As Surions face turned pale, he turned to his brother, whos face was as pale as his, as his brother's head turns to him, he hears him say: "Live on brother, never falter.". These brought tears unto Surions eyes as his brother was carried by two large elven men to the exit of the court room. As he sat there, depressed and confused, he sees El'thero walk to him as if he had won a competition and say : "Too bad the great Surion had to betray his city, I guess all the lies  you told about me are not true then -laughs-" whith that, Surion is taken away by the elven guards out of the room and threw out through the gates of the city, Never to return again. Through the years of isolation, Surion learned to love animals, but in turn, hated any other race. He now lives in the forest near the great crossing, selling herbs,potions and enchanted books to Adventurers who stumble upon his shack.

Ambitions for the Future: He wishes to avenge his brothers death, and one day return home to Malinor.
Personality: Although serious and tends to stay away from people, He has a deep emotional wound , because he thinks that it is his fault his brother was executed.

Skills: Alchemy, archey and swordsmanship 
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

He has light yellow hair. think eye brows and has dark brown eyes, although seemingly skinny, he has very muscular arms and upper body.

Any other details you wish to share about your character: He has a soft spot for Animals and has turned vegan, when he goes to a city, he wears a black cloak and covers his face. 

He has a scar on his right arm that he got from combat training

[ski_king3 0]

 

For one, you did not post your application to the Minecraft Forum Post. This isn't my reason for the denial, but please, do so next time.

 

Secondly, in your biography, you frequently blend Malinorian and Haelun'orian customs together, mentioning Haelun'or positions but placing them in Malinor. I think you are a bit confused in regards to their present state of separation. Perhaps this is a bit harsh, but I really expect a very strong understanding of server lore from alt account applicants. I would advise you try and speak with the leaders of one or both nations and try to get a better understanding in regards to which positions are a part of which nation.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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