[Denied][Dwarf]

[Endventurer 0]

[Dwarf]



Minecraft Account Name: defuriousone

How old are you?: 14 (almost 15)

Time-Zone: Brussels, Belgium (+1 GMT)

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I haven't played any rpg servers but know what it is.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Searching on the web about rpg servers

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: /

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, indeed.



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing: Playing a character in a specific storyline in a fantasy world with quests and dungeons

Meta-gaming: Playing as an Over-Powered character

Power-emoting: Very explicit emoting and sometimes in inappropriate ways



In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name: Dreroth FoeHammer

Current Age: 238

Sub-race (if any): Mountain Dwarf

Clan (if any): He hasn't got the chance to join a clan

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs
long): Dreroth was a fine young dwarf with Dark red hair. His parents
though were Cavern Dwarves and did not know why he had the red hair of
Mountain dwarves. His father accused his mother of being not loyal to
him, by banning her out of his family. So Dreroth never knew his mother.
His father he knew al too well, and he didn't like it, he was always
drunk and very aggressive against Dreroth.

When Dreroth was 83 years old, and already living alone, he recieved the
news that his dad had fallen in one of his mining caverns. Although he
didn't like his father, the news struck him hard. He went back to his
old home to recieve the tools of his old father which he heired. With
the new tools he acquired he thought to finally live on a mountain and
delve the ores in it's roots.

Ambitions for the Future: He wants to find the perfect mountain for his
kin and himself to live on, and when his mining and fighting days will
be over, he wants to start his own tavern.

Personality: He is a dwarf of his word and never backs from a fight, his
first priority will be his kin. He helps strangers but not the elves,
he's not fond of them. He passes his days working and ends his day with
an ale in his hand.

Skills: He heired the skill of making tools and weapons from his father, but his love is building houses.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Any
other details you wish to share about your character: He prefers to
fight with an axe or hammer or even his fists before he needs to fight
with a bow.Open-Response-QuestionsEach
question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as
descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.____1.
Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit
of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a
very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the
only way to access the deposit. What do you do?Answer: Dreroth
would mark the place of the diamonds, and look outside for wood and
other materials to make a stable passway to get to the ore.2.
You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your
hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going
through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small
wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are
sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the
dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to
approach the young dwarf. What do you do?Answer: He wouldn't
think and stand up and sit next to the youngster, if they would still
proceed to approach the dwarf with blade unsheated then he would pick up
his great double-bladed axe and warn them if they had any bad
intentions for the dwarf they would meet his blade. If it would come to a
battle and some stuff would be broken, he would pay for the damage.3.
Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out
to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel
and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his
face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?Answer:
First of all he would ask how much it costs. If it's free he would be
carefull and ask if anything's wrong. If it would cost him something he
would pay and gladly accept it and maybe have a lil' chat with him.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...



Incorrect Meta-gaming and Power-emoting definitions. More information can be found on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Expand slightly on the bio, such an old character should have a more developed past.

Explain in the bio how he learned his skills.

Expand on the Open Response Questions and add dialogue to the last two.


A very good first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. Send me a PM if you have any questions.

[everblue2er101 906]

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