[Denied][Human] Ragnar Application!

[hoodmaster906 32]

[ski_king3 0]

 

Your meta-gaming and power-emoting could use some work, especially the latter. If you need help, this wiki article can serve as a good source to base your answers. That being said, don't plagiarize.

 

Your biography is too short, and needs to be extended. Also, it uses very little server lore, and is pretty cliche. I'd advise writing a biography that does not have your character wanting to become King, or having your character's parents both dying in some tragic manner. Of course, the last part is more your personal preference.

 

Please include a written description to pair with the skin.

 

Please expand your ORQ's quite a bit, as they are too short. Also, you cannot kill someone without provocation in your server application, as this requires a villain application. Expand on your ORQ's, add dialogue, and try to remove any villainous activity.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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