[Denied](Dwarf) Jowenthehutt Application

[Jowen of moria 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - jowenthehutt

How old are you?: - 16

What time-zone do you live in?: - GMT

 

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -I have a bit of role-playing experience. on many games giving a large variety. From mount and blade,elder scrolls and lord of the rings online.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No i have not

 

How did you hear about us?: -I was looking for a fun lord of the rings servers as lord of the rings is a most loved hobbies of mine and i came across this server and was hooked.

 

What do you think the server will be like? - i reckon the server will be good as it is lord of the rings topic and it must be enjoyable as its role-play

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes i have read the rules and agreed

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - You cannot log-out during combat.

 

 

Definitions

 

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.

 

What is roleplaying?: - Role playing is taking on the repsonsobilties of the charcters in the story. and being able to use the social norms and values of there society.

 

 

What’s metagaming?: - Meta-gaming is when take infomatin from the ooc and use it in the igc.

 

 

What’s powergaming?: - You force the other character into to doing what you narrated.

 

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Breacon orefeild

 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Mountain dwarf

 

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 30

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - The Birth.

          His name was breacon he was born inside of the mountain,  the town were breacon was born was very large with merchants coming and going. this town was a prosperous, with a population of over 15,000. The town has  a vey diffrent view of archtecture, for theses people the bigger the better,the more colour the more beutiful. The town center has a fountain with a statue of the king of ther clan. A Brewer stands out from all the buildings built from rock and  wood this building will never fall.Here the famous ale was brewed and drank. 'The rock bottom'. Next to this great brewer is a granery made from a similar rock and wood. in here they store all the weat and meat for all the town and its logger's.The pathes made from a lovely cobblestone patterns and fences white to brown. All these things make this town as famous as it is. The town of Moltabee. His farther named khordaldrum Orefeil, held the family name as the most talented axe smith in and all around Moltabee mountain, and when war came to the clans he was a warrior for the free peoples. The mother a skilled jewler named joffly orefeild crafting rings, necklaces and other magical things forn the dwarves of the mountain. 

 

Breacons childhood.

          Breacon started school as a very odd dwarf as he was not tanned or light skinned but really pale which to some dwarve's is not right and was taken very seriously. So when Breacon was 1 and a half seasons old he was able to weild and axe and a sheid.And he could also make the rings his mother makes to much a high standard. Then on the day of 'Durins Day' the clans went to war causing blood and riches his farther the honrouble man he was went with the thousands of dwarve's to war. so in the many months that he was gone Breacon learn't to read and right dwarvish. All of the other dwarve's of 2 seasons shown doubt on him of leaving the wonderfull but unascabpable town. but Breacon had to find his farther as he new that he was alive he new his farther could die from another one of these petty wars. Then the time came Breacon found himslef a job protecting his mothers trade on the road from town to town. To breacon this was a miracle to others it was a death sentance.

 

The road.

 

On the road of cobblestone,merhants and free peoples. Breacon came acrros many races and people he has never seen with his own eyes. He loved it no fighting just riding. That is until night, Breacon allways had a somewhat fear of night but he over came it with the honour to his dad and his clan. But then He heard a scream not a dwarf screaming not a human but a ORC pack running to him woth spear and swords sheathed and ready to kill so, Breacon a novice of battle rides off leavong the bounty of rings and wristbands to the groussly ors's to take. Then around the rocky hill face was a drop to a further down road were he could not stop the horse or himslef in time to this sudden fate. Then fate turns to his side and helps him.A fellow mountain dwarf adventuring to open world. i asked his name and he says Joren Stonehearth..............They than went left telling stories of our selfs and our town on the merge of adventuring.

 

 

What are they like (personality)?: - Minor fear of the night.Strong.Brave.Honourable.Allways hungry.

 

What are their ambitions?: - To find his farther and set up a succseful blacksmith to make a finer armor and weapons.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - Great weilder and smith of a axe. Smart in number and literature.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - lack of height, not good woth animals, under skilled in alchamy.

 

What do they look like?: - pale skin, brown hair, 3 foot, brown eyes, 3-inch beard. Really broad shoulders.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He really likes food and drink and loves open giant battles.

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the reasons I am going to list below. Don't be discouraged by this, however, as I'm sure you can fix it!

 

 

 I mainly found faults in your biography. Whilst lengthy, which is good, there were some issues though. One of the things was that you did not include lore in your biography. It's needed that you understand our lore! Another thing was that Orcs raided your town. Yes, Orcs are bloodlusty, but this is very cliché and overused. I'm sure you'll be able to come up with a more original idea!

 

Then, you have created some things which are not part of the lore. "Durin's Day" is one of them. This makes me think that you believe that this server is based off of Lord of the Rings. Well, it kinda is with the races and the name, but other than that, it's completely different. Our lore is completely different from Lord of the Rings. I suggest you read up on the lore here.

 

It may seem like a lot, but it's only a few things. I'm sure you'll be able to fix it!

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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