[Denied]Elrohir (Elf) Application

[Deece 9]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Deece94

How old are you?: - 18

What time-zone do you live in?: - GMT +10:00

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I have played many RPGs (I know they are different to RP) but only one that had strict roleplaying (I cant remember the name of it sorry)

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No

 

How did you hear about us?: - Googled the top RP servers and found this one

What do you think the server will be like? - I think it will be fun to play and integrate my character into the open world.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes I certainly do

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - “make sure you don’t break any of the servers lore” I love reading about lore for different worlds and it would be awesome if everybody strictly kept to it.

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: - playing the character of something other than yourself

 

What’s metagaming?: - using knowledge that my character doesn’t know yet e.g. Knowing somebodies name without an introduction

What’s powergaming?: - making definite choices that will affect another character e.g. Saying that you hit another character vs saying that you take a swing at another character

 

In-Character Information

What’s your character called?: - Elrohir Amandil

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Elf (Dark Elf)

 

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 67

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: - 

Elrohir Grew up in a tiny, not very well known farming village in the very north of Malinor. His father’s name is Amrod Amandil and his mothers is Elbereth Amandil. Elrohir is an only child.

Elrohir was always a quiet youth, preferring to spend his time alone reading or practising with archery rather than spending time with other Elves. Due to this he was smart for his age and grew into a great tracker and hunter but he was a slim build and lacked experience in sword fighting and farming. Because of this he was ignored by most of the village.

When he was 42 he went out to hunt for two weeks. He came home from hunting only to find the village burning. His skills in tracking told him it had been a Bohra raid. Many bodies littered the ground, including his fathers. The tracks also showed that some Elves were taken alive, his mother likely one of them. He followed that tracks for a few kilometres but lost them as they were days ahead of him. For 20 years he searched the northern wilderness looking for signs of Elbereth but to no avail. From then he has worked as a hunter in the East, never staying in one place for long, making money to survive and honing his skills in order to one day search again for the Bohra responsible for the tragedy.

 

What are they like (personality)?: - Elrohir is a quiet and solitary person mostly but has a hot temper when Bohra are involved.

 

What are their ambitions?: - to train so that he can exact revenge upon the tribe of Bohra who killed his father and to find his mother.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - He is handy with a bow and with tracking wild animals. 

 

What are their weaknesses?: - He is driven with revenge and will look to solve a problem by himself without looking for help from others.

 

What do they look like?: - He has dark skin like any other Dark elf with dark brown hair and is slimly built. 

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - he can never look to Malinor as home again as it only brings back horrible memories so that is why he stays with the humans in the east. 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

Sadly I must deny this application for a few reasons.

 

~ Your definitions are not quite correct and quite short. Expand a little more on this.

~ You bio is very confusing and cliched, please expand on your bio and try to avoid the classic "my village was destroyed" and "parents are dead" cliches.

~ Not required but would help you, expand more on your personality, ambitions, skills and weaknesses.

 

If you have any questions about your denial, feel free to PM me and I will be more than happy to help you. You may reapply 24 hours after this post. Good luck ^_^

 

 

~Mew~

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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