[Denied]Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  AshleySkelp

How old are you?: - 12

What time-zone do you live in?: -  Eastern Time Zone

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  I've roleplayed on various forums on several websites.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Not on minecraft ,no.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -  No.

How did you hear about us?: - A friend that currently roleplays on the server.

What do you think the server will be like? -  Judging by the rules and what my friend has said, a place where I can roleplay and really get into my character. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  My favorite rule is the no bullying/ cyberbullying as I myself dislike bullying in any form, as I am a victim of it.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not Google’s.

What is roleplaying?: -  Pretending to be a fictional character that you control and empower.

What’s metagaming?: -  Having your character know of something they couldn't know realistically. 

What’s powergaming?: -  When someone does an action against you, then, without waiting for you to respond says it has succeeded or not without your reaction.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Evelyn Nithaniel

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -   Elf

What sex are they?: -  Female

How old are they?: -  174 years old

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family: -   She grew up with no siblings, which isn't very uncommon.  Her mother lives in Malinor .  She practices no religion, as does Evelyn. However, unlike her parents, she harbors a strong belief in the creator.  Her father was killed in a battle many years before, leaving her mother a widow.  This has left her scarred and tattered but she refuses to let it show. She works for money to keep her mother's home standing.

What are they like (personality)?: -   Evelyn depends greatly on the fellowship of others.  More than she likes, in fact.  She enjoys the wilderness and outdoors, much alike to the animals. 

What are their ambitions?: -  Open a tavern of her own. At the very least, work at one.

Do they have any special skills?: -  Archery , Very Convincing

What are their weaknesses?: -  Tiredness

What do they look like?: -   She looks to be 17 and has light hair and fair skin.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

 

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[mmat 7460]

 

Thank you for applying, however your application has been denied this time. The reasons for this are as follows;

 

- Your meta-gaming definition needs to be revised as it is not quite right

 

- Your brief description section should be more detailed, please add another paragraph about your character's history

 

- Please add a more impacting weakness, tiredness can affect anyone in the same way and is not really a weakness as such

 

Please correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours time from this post.
 

[mmat 7460]

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