[Denied]My Application

[Monstercreations 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Monstercreations.

How old are you?: - 14.

What time-zone do you live in?: - Eastern time zone.

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes I have if skyrim is a RPG.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No I have not.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No I have not.

How did you hear about us?: - I was looking for a texture pack and the creator was promoting you.

What do you think the server will be like? - Extremely well done and full of players to interact with.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - The rule about staying in character. I agree with the staying in character rule the most because if no one is in character then it isn't an Role playing server.

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: - Roleplaying is when you become a character in a game and play as them and not as yourself.

What’s metagaming?: - I do not know.

What’s powergaming?: - I do not know.

In-Character Information

What’s your character called?: - Belegorndir Lonir

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Elf, wood elf.

What sex are they?: - Male.

How old are they?: - 230 (23) years.

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Belegorndir Lonir and his parents lived in Elandriel and then some of their kin heard about the abundance of jobs and prosperity in Normador. The fast sprouting colony was growing strong, and it was attracting the eyes of many some where Belegorndir's kin. With hast they decided that it was a good idea to go to Normador and experience the comfort of more wood elves. However our family had a falling out half were reloacating to Normador and my half were going to stay in Elandriel. Years later after time had passed I was sent to Normador to make amends with my kin for the family's sake. It worked and when I arrived back in Elandriel I was greeted by the bitter news of my parents sudden death while I was away visiting my kin. My brother Oldir and I were left in Elandier with many pieces to pick up many things that needed to be amended.

          Under all the stress I could not take it, my parents owned a lumber business and I was to step up and help but I did not want to do that. I wanted to go adventure and explore. so I packed a bag and left and it has started a new chapter in my life. I might adventure for a bit more and then go work in the family buissnes with my brother in Elandriel or I might go live with other kin in Normador or I might stay dormant in the whole situations and not go back at all.

What are they like (personality)?: - Curious, smart, adventurous, and sly.

What are their ambitions?: - They hope to adventure before they have to take up the family business.

Do they have any special skills?: - A good shot with a bow and can be very persuasive, and is remarkable light on their feet.

What are their weaknesses?: - Not the biggest or the strongest person.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He has dirty blond hair, a light brown colored skin almost like brow sugar,and a brown colored traveling outfit.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He is unsure about his future in the world.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

You need to fill out your definitions. Saying you don't know isn't an acceptable answer. Many sites have the definitions you just need to search for them. Make sure you put them into your own words though. Plagiarism will result in an application ban.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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