1: Your skin might be considered.... adequate. It doesn't look much like a dwarf to me, but I fear if I say to get a new one you'll come back with a honeydew skin and be as cheesy as the other dwarves who put in no effort.
2: Your biography. It's incredibly cliche` to have your family killed by mysterious orcs who then somehow vanish and leave behind a child. I'm also going to have to call powergamer on the magical wizard who appeared, vaporized your enemies, then raised you as his own. You should work on this category a bit and cut out the powergamey bit. Cliche' as it is, you could have your family killed by orc bandits, but maybe have the local cityguard put them down, instead of some mythical wizard magically appearing to sling fireballs at everybody, eh?
3: Minestatus voting: I don't know if we're supposed to accept or autodeny these apps, but it's definitely a black mark to your record. In the future, all you need do is www.lordofthecraft.net, then look at the right side of the screen for the "VOTE" button, push it, enter the captcha and your name, and be done.
You're close, but just a bit too far outside the boundries of what would be acceptable. I think you'll be able to get this on your next attempt, if you decide to make one.