Daisy

Moved to Accepted Forum

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Although I like your bio, there are still a few problems with your application, you have 24 hours to fix them, or your app will be denied: Your definitions of meta-gaming and power-gaming are a tad off. Please define them in the sense of how they apply to the server. You can read about them on our wiki, but please don't copy-paste them, write them in your own words. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying'>Link to wiki page. Your character's skin is one I have far too often. It would be better if you got a more unique skin, or edited that one. Perhaps changing the clothing color would be cool. Just send me a PM when you have made those changes, or of you have any questions. To send a PM, click on my user picture, and it will take you to my profile page, then click the "Send message" button located above the big green box. (Reputaion)

Moved to Denied Forum

Although your definitions are right on the spot, your character information is lacking. I would recommend expanding a little on your bio. For example, why does your father know politics and philosophy? Your character also lacks in much information. Perhaps mention more about your cousins. One last thing I found strange is that you have your mother's surname (I assume Krea is your mother and Marcus is your father), but that is a minor detail. You also slept human wrong, but no biggie. You may reapply in 24 hours from the time I made this post. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

*walks away*

8000, and the adorable puppies

7000 mina, and da two puppies ((edited, typo, meant 7 not 8.))

*Stares at the edgy bidder* "6500 'nd two puppies"

Looks back at the edgy bidder "5000 'nd a puppy!"

*Looks at the edgy better* "3000!"

*Lord Onar Stromhammer shouts from the crowd* "1500!"

In response to my post earlier, sorry. I misread the OP. All in all these are good ideas. Implement them all I say.

Oh yes, another sub forum great idea, I don't think we have enough yet. BUT, a chat room actually sounds like a good idea. EDIT: Misread the OP. Sounds like a great ideas tbh. Also sorry for my sarcasm :P

Your Name: Onar Stormhammer Your vote: My bb Fili

Mcname: Kowaman Forum Name: Kowaman Skype Name: kowamangeneral Time Zone: EST -5:00 Do you feel you have a solid grasp on our lore and an understanding of the standards we have for applications? Yes I do. Why you want to be an AT member? I love helping out with the server. Ever since I joined I always thought that the AT was full of awesome people and wanted to to be part of them. I am often of the forums and love to read things. I see a lot of apps posted where people are having issues understanding a concept or lore ect. and wish to help people understand what they are doing wrong. I see too often apps getting accepted where there are some flaws in the lore, and no comment is made from the AT. I also feel that it takes quite some time for apps to get read, I would be checking the apps forum very often and be right on top of things.

MC Name: Kowaman RP Name: Onar Stormhammer Age: 468 ((16)) Reasons: To strengthen our great nation's economy and get the resources necessary for success. I wish to improve upon the current systems of organization and procedure involving gathering resources, but still make the mines available to everyone. I feel like I could help the kingdom imminently if I were to be elected to the position of Yemekar's Pick.

If I never wrote a VA my character wouldn't have a bio. Honestly writing a VA strengthened my character development as a whole. If your VA gets denied that means that you didn't put enough effort in it and you would be doing evil with no RP reasons. EDIT: If I never wrote a VA my character wouldn't have much of a bio.

It's in the dwarven mines :)

Everything is fabulous.

Lord Onar speaks with the King after. "Indago, is anytin in Azgot' safe? W'o knows w'at moight go missin next. Weh best do sometin' t' protect dah artifacts wit'in."

Lord Onar stands there in awe, barely believing what he is being told. "Bah Yamakar's bread! W'at could d'is possibleh beh? 'ave weh angered dah gods?"