cj_scout
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http://tinyurl.com/mdxvf9o Finished the first chapter of this novel thing I'm starting. Bit long but if any of you would read it and give me some opinions, I'd appreciate it.
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If your central character is telling the story, don't voice their thoughts like dialogue. You can just say the thought. The reader knows that they are the one doing the thinking.
"Their sheer numbers brought a wave of dread. It seemed we had done enough to poke the nest, and all the ants were out for vengeance"
...or something. Honestly I was just skim reading.
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