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I think you have a nice attempt for your first time submitting lore. you might be better off writing a culture for snow dwelling dwarves ?

"Alone." A fellow drones, cutting some wood. "That's the tragedy of a Hunter. Consumed by their hunt unless something brings them out."

Klaus receives a medal for his calculated risk and reward assessment.

I thoroughly enjoy this piece +1

Please, Administration, do what's right. This ban is silly and you know it. Matt is a good player, and him being banned for a year for something so trite is just laughable. Help yourselves by unbanning Imattyz, step up.

A hunter grumbles, "I'm alone now. Figures."

((you need better images dude, these pretty pictures are low res as hell))

Klaus sits in his laboratory, gloves pattering the table as he thinks of his Elven friend. "What a curious individual. He's like me, but denies it. Even though I departed, I hope to see him sometime soon... away from The Beast's grasp." He shifts from the table, clutching his arm as he walks over to the alchemical furnace, depositing fuel and igniting the flames. Fire reminded him of the Owynists purified by flame, and Khaine's philosophy. "To be purified from the Beast is to embrace health." He rasps as he added various liquids into the cannisters attached to the alchemical furnace, watching the fluids slowly drain and become gas, only to return as a combined fluid; a needed change for something new and improved. "The wielders were not the only disease there." The new fluid found itself in a third cannister -- a fine orange, much like the center of a flame. It is the great purifier, a powerful task, and blessed fuel. The needed medicine. He gathered vials and attached them to the spigot connected to the canister. "In truth, it was all a disease. I wore all that gear to protect myself from the plague carriers. Twisted vermin that spread the infection." Vials filled themselves with each actioning of the spigot. "The longer he stayed there, the more he had a chance of being corrupted. I hope he came to his senses, or some act of divine miracle will have him depart and clear his mind." "In the future perhaps, you will find the infection purged." Inverting each vial, he took a few moments for them to settle. He took one, and uncorked the supplement. It was a matter of seconds for him to down the medicine, with bits of the fluid dripping from his teeth and falling to the floor. "But that is a tale for another time. Only the future will tell."

I TOTALLY read all of it so I can tell you that this lore is BAD okay maybe not probably not because it adds more depth to being a Naztherak while staying within its respective theme

"Calm down." Ordered The Hand That Fed.

its just so BAD i say this as a big lie

"Magic's bad. Get rid of magic." Says an aventailed half elf. "We be fine wi'out magic."

I hate dark hollows, and I don't get why deep swords make permanent wounds unless healed by ascended. Nice nod to berserk I just don't see how it makes sense

Aesthetic

Dragon flame needs to specify that it doesn't instantly melt someone. I can see it being easily abused.

I like it but I feel like there's a lot of fluff, which is fine i guess

"Fok magic, I tells yah. Fok it all." Says a man with an aventail covering his lowerface. "Magic's the issue. Fok'n get rid uh'it."

"I am the last." Said an old soul, and even as he mourned his old battle brother, he also celebrated their many victories and how Rakim lived his life.

Give guns

"Unfortunate." An alchemist grunts.

Actual ******* legend

There needs to be a synergy between holy and medical roleplay. It sucks for someone who is operating on a dude and then some holy mage walks up like: which ultimately wastes one side's time (which they spent putting into trying to fix someone who got stabbed in the side), because some holy man can give the dude a glowy prostate exam and pat them on the head after. It's unintuitive and breeds the mentality that most consequences can be taken away because of holy magic. At least with alchemy there requires recovery time and there's a chance of dying of exhaustion if too much is consumed. If it was made so holy magic could stabilize wounds or clot blood, and then medical rp needs to ensue to fully fix the person, that'd be fantastic. This is just my two cents though, so take it as you will. Qouters tear my reply apart. also when someone refuses holy healing ic or gets mad when they see holy magic. please dont get salty ooc mister/misses holy mage

this is just evil