Heya, applicant;
Your application has been denied!
Your application lacks all of the out of character information, this is especially important as it tells us all of the important things that we need to know about you out-of-character wise, such as whether you’ve logged onto the server yet and what your minecraft name is. Please fill this in next time.
Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming are VERY incorrect. This thread can be used to get information on the definitions, but please remember not to be plagiarise them.
Your biography lacks three references to the server lore, and the current references are incorrect to the current state of roleplay, as Vailor has been abandoned and Courland no longer exists. Please use the wiki to get more information about server lore. Also, your biography is very cliche, it’d be lovely to write something original and creative as it’s something we greatly appreciate on the server in general.
Your character’s personality, ambitions and strengths/weaknesses are very vague. These tell us a lot about your character, and therefore I’d like you to expand more on these things. They’re all also very cliche, and as stated before we appreciate originality and creativity.
While this isn’t something that’s a basis for denying you on, you have quite a lot of grammatical mistakes in your application. I’d love it if you could fix those as roleplay is text-based and therefore the main form of communication.
You may re-apply in 24 hours.
If you have any questions, please send me a PM via the forums.