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This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Hey, applicant; Your application has been denied. Your definitions of metagaming and powergaming are partially incorrect. Feel free to use this thread to get more information on the definitions. But please remember not to copy, we’d love to hear it in your own words. Your biography includes no server lore, but instead it includes lore that doesn’t exist, such as your character coming from a village south of the map or The Dark Returners, we expect at least three pieces of server lore in your application. Here’s a link to the wiki to get more information about the lore. Your character could not have been born in 1050, the current year is 1575 which means he’d have been born 19 years before that, so in 1556. Your personality traits are JUST likes and dislikes. Personality trait are so much more than just likes and dislikes, it’s things like being quirky and funny, greedy or even really dumb. Your strengths/weaknesses are really unbalanced, he has four strengths but only two weaknesses, and they’re all combat related except for farming. Strengths and weaknesses don’t have to be combat related, they can be so much more. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, send me a PM via the forums.

<3 thanks guys

+1 Should be moved to whitelist apps, think it'll be a great help.

How could you.

This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Hey, applicant; Your application has been denied! You failed to make the required changes, all you’ve made where some really minor changes, such as adding “is a gambler” to your personality traits, which isn’t even a personality trait. While you’ve made your strengths/weaknesses more realistic and less joke-like, they’re unoriginal, we praise originality and creativity on here. You’ve also put one of your personality traits as both a personality trait and a weaknesses. I also recommended your brush up on your grammar a little, while your mistakes are not that big, the main form of communication is through text, and therefore mistakes can simply make roleplay hard to understand. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions send me a PM via the forums.

"If I get blamed for this **** again..." Mumbled Dirk Novokain, distant memories from Vailor come to his mind.

Honestly some of the best lore I've seen in ages. +1

"Mhm..." Maximilian stated after reading it with Sixtus, "Quite a valuable treaty." "May this bring them prosperity." Said Dirk, going back to his writing.

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Heya, applicant; Your application has been ACCEPTED! This application has been accepted. On behalf of the Application Team I warmly welcome you Lord of the Craft. Your application was a pleasure to read. I hope you enjoy roleplaying on the Isles of Axios! You’ll be whitelisted shortly, while you wait feel free to browse our forums or visit our wiki. If you have any questions, please shoot me a PM via either the forums or in-game

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

Your alt application has been ACCEPTED! Have fun roleplaying with your alternate account, do remember to follow the rules!

Hey, applicant; Your application is pending. Your application was very well written, but there’s a simple change that I’d like you to make before you’ll be allowed to play. Your skin is not appropriate, a boy in a red hoodie is not very fitting for the medieval fantasy theme that we’re going for on the server. Please find a more fitting skin and you’ll be accepted. You have 24 hours to make the required changes, failure to do so will result in denial. PM me via the forums if you have any questions or you’ve made the changes.

IMPERIAL CITIZENSHIP FORM Name: Maximilian Gotthold (GusanoArentonio) Surname/House: Gotthold Date of Birth: 27th of The Grand Harvest 1548 Gender: Male Race: Human, Heartlander Citizenship Class (A or B): B Physical Description Height: 5'11 Weight: 145 lbs. Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Blonde Skin Color/Shade: Pale Outstanding Markings/Tattoos: None. Personal Information Home Address (Leave blank if unknown): None, yet. Region of Residence (Leave blank if unknown): None, yet. Profession/Occupation: All. Oath of Loyalty: "I, Maximilian Gotthold, hereby swear my loyalty the Emperor of the Holy Orenian Empire entirely by my free will. I swear to read and obey the laws of the Empire and understand the punishments and penalties that will be incurred should I violate the law."

Hey, applicant; Your application is pending! Fear not, pending is not the end, there’s only a few changes I require you to make on this application. Your personality traits only include likes and dislikes. A personality trait is something like being stubborn, kind or arrogant, maybe even using your hands to put emphasis on your words. Your current personality traits are also very vague, please write more on this. Your character's strengths/weaknesses are quite weird, being able to ride a unicycle and juggle? Huh? Also your weakness, doing things without thinking about them is actually a personality trait. But then again, they’re pretty vague, please write more here. You have quite a lot of grammatical mistakes, while it’s not required, I’d love it if you could fix those. You have 24 hours to make the required changes. If you have any questions or you finish doing the changes, send me a PM via the forums.

This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum.

Hey, applicant; Your application has been denied. Your definitions of powergaming and metagaming are copied from Wikipedia. Please use this thread to get information about the definitions, and this time write it in your own words. Your biography is way too short, we expect at least two lengthy paragraphs and yours is barely a paragraph. Here’s a link to our wiki for lore you can use. Also, he couldn’t have been born in September, as LoTC has it’s own special months, here’s a link to the page about it. Your personality traits are not personality traits, these aren’t really likes and dislikes, they’re more things like being stubborn or possibly using his hands to put emphasis on his words. Your character's weaknesses/strengths are very vague and cliche, there’s too many generic characters who start out as good sword fighters. They also tell you a lot about what character can and can’t do. Please write more about these. Your skin looks too modern, a man in a blue suit with a tie? Please pick something more like the current year, which is 1575. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions, please shoot me a PM via the forums.

I tried. Fourth one is the best imo. Okay so apparently I butchered the formatting, will just give imgur album link. http://imgur.com/a/BqOXB

Has my support.