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  1. KingoArcher

    BoatmanOnFire

    Changed Status to Denied Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Definition of roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. Your Character Name includes that of a star wars character. Please fix this. Your Character Biography states that your character witnessed the rise and fall of the Galactic Republic. This does not follow server lore. Feel free to reference the wiki for assistance. Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc. Your Personality Traits/Quirks state that he has a 500+ IQ. This is Powergaming. Please refer to the Powergaming rules. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response ties into your Character Biography! Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue. Please be sure to add one! Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI ♥
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    BoatmanOnFire

    Changed Status to Under Review
  3. KingoArcher

    PICLEBOB

    Changed Status to Pending Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F ♥
  4. KingoArcher

    PICLEBOB

    Changed Status to Under Review
  5. KingoArcher

    666LUCIFER_666

    Changed Status to Denied Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Definition of roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI ♥ Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above ♥
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    666LUCIFER_666

    Changed Status to Under Review
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    ol_Lil_Nasty

    Changed Status to Pending
  8. KingoArcher

    ol_Lil_Nasty

    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great! Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Character Biography states that your character’s mother was killed by bandits. This is too common of a character trope on LOTC. Feel free to change it up a bit. Death by arson, disease, and at birth are all great replacements. Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this to fix the eye color! Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action and have the dialogue left in quotation marks. Please make sure to add one! In regards to the rule that you missed, going AFK for any unreasonable amount of time is not okay. Going to run to the bathroom is common practice. Common sense is all thats needed. You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me! Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523 If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F ♥
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    ol_Lil_Nasty

    Changed Status to Under Review
  10. KingoArcher

    DiamondSlime69

    Changed Status to Denied Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed! Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming Your Definition of Roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one! Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI ♥
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    DiamondSlime69

    Changed Status to Under Review
  12. What if cats are actually the dominate creature on earth and just brain washed us?

  13. Swiss would read over this message and look at the ISA uniform next to him. He would squeak the sentence, "It was evea even being used."
  14. Swiss would take a yellow marble out of the bag and toss it in his mouth before reading the note. "Thith ith the wortht tathting gumball I have ever had!" The marble would be spat out onto the floor and stomped on multiple times. Swiss would use the letter as a napkin later in the night.
  15. The Great Gumball Heist The Musin of the Mouse Hole are proud to announce the first major recycling operation of Almaris. On the 8th of The Deep Cold, in the year 24 of the second Age, the Broken Tap Tavern was seen packed to the brim full of Musin discussing a mischievous operation. Squeaks of info were heard about an operation regarding the Orenian Candy Store. The plan was simple. Recycle the Candy Shop's gumball machine. As the brave Musin began to pack for their journey, the little Musiletts prepared raspberry stew for their final meal before departure. The brave musin gathered their bags and prepped the cart for their journey. As they rolled the cart out of the cave and through the exit of Urguan they had one mission, retrieve the gumball machine. As they arrived to the gate of oren, they had swiftly convinced a man to let them through the citizen doors. Little to be known, this was almost their demise. The man had trapped them in the doors and ran off with a smirk on his face. It seemed as if all hope was lost. It was only till one kind ISA guard let the muslin through the gates that they would be set free. The plan was still ago. While all but two Musin left for the piano store, two Musin headed to the candy shop to loosen the bolts on the gumball machine. If it were not for the brave Musin that played the pianos with their soul, the plan would have been foiled. As the music playing Musin scurried to the candy shop, one man followed. The man saw the Musin attempting to lift the gumball machine and attempted to call for the ISA. One Musin jumped up and stole the mans glasses, forfeiting his ability to find an ISA officer. The Musin quickly places the gumball machine on the cart, and rolled it out of the city as fast as they could. After hauling the cart over the side walls, and a bit if dexterity based activity, the Musin had successfully acquired the gumball machine. Signed,
  16. Head Knight Carson Berthmeud would read the letter. Although pleased, he would slam his fist on the table seeing he was marked as 'Guardsman.' "Ziss ees sahme serious bullsheet."
  17. Carson Berthmeud would look at the letter and wonder why the heck he had never had a birthday celebration before. “Perhaps it’s because it is every elven week!” He’d state at his desk.
  18. Commander of Knights Carson Berthmeud would Look at the letter, and begin drafting his journey to visit the war nation of Krugmar with the rest of the Knights of Leumont.
  19. Carson Berthmeud would sit in his chair reading the letter. “So I guess he’s finally made the right choice.” He would look down at his flame patch, and begin to scribble a letter to be send to Jolfrey himself. “My friend, it pleases me to hear this information. I propose we hold the converson ceremony together, and invite all the people of Leumont to join us. To the future of Leumont my friend.” Signed, Carson Berthmeud, Corporal of the Knights of Leumont
  20. Leumont - A Call To Religious Reform The Jarldom of Leumont has been, for as long as most of us can remember, a Cannonist state. For years we have been a safe haven for those in Norland who wish to follow our religion. In these times, it does not seem fir to follow a god with such roots as we currently do; one with roots tracing back to the Holy Orenian Empire. I am here to call for change, for our people to follow a better path, one following the red faith. I am here to call for religious reform in Leumont. I bid that we become the new protectors of the flame; that we tear off the cross that we wear so proudly on our chest, and replace it with a marking of the flame itself. We must swear our lives to the all father himself, and praise his being in its full. - Corporal Carson Berthmeud
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    KingoArcher

    Allot was orphaned and found by a human in the woods all by himself. She thought he was human untill she say his ears. She hesitantly took him home knowing how inn her village elves are known as an enemy. She cut his ears down as he grew up. The only reason he was never caught was because he resembled a human. He grew older a learned farming and basic hunting skills with a bow. One day the town was rampaged with a group of wood elves (which he did not know he was one of) and he ran off for saftey. He lived in the woods for many years and wondered to a new area called Arcas. He is looking to settle down and make a family.
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    KingoArcher

    he dreams to be an Adunian Bowman.
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    KingoArcher

    Oliver Was just an eight year old boy when his parents were killed by the orcs in there home for a crime they did not commit. Oliver watched from a crack in the door as father was beaten to death and his mother was dragged out of the room to soon get beheaded. His father was a hunter and taught Oliver to become very skilled with a bow. Oliver ran away and was adopted by a wood elf named Hartha. She brought him to the Wanaca Woods. There she taught him there religion as he already possessed his connection to his family. He left her when he turned 18 to begin his journey. He has been set on a quest to build a team of humans to find out who had killed his parents. He will stop for noting and will do-whatever he has to do no-matter the consequence. He one day wants to fight alongside the Adunians and be lead by the elefs like Hartha.
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    AutumnBlossom

    hi, nice app. Im waiting for mine to get read
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