[Denied]Application

[cooltrainer01 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - cooltrainer01

How old are you?: - 16

What time-zone do you live in?: - East

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I have roleplayed a little on a couple of online websites

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No i have not

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Not once

How did you hear about us?: -Web searching

What do you think the server will be like? - A world full of players who are dedicated to playing their character  

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - of course 

What’s your favorite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - 

• You need to keep in-character at all times. Don't over-use local OOC, but make sure you use the provided chat channel when speaking OOC'ly!
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Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - when you step into your made up character shoes and live his or her life

What’s metagaming?: -  out of character  information that the character himself wouldn't know about

What’s powergaming?: - when you act like god and don't get hurt or effected by anything.It ruins Rp entirely. 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Satori kyron

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 18

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Satori was born in the town of  Al'Khazar.His mother a nurse and father a miner.When he was just a 12 year old boy his father had him taught by a teacher basic sword skills.His father wanted him to follow in his footsteps to become a miner while his mother wanted him to become a doctor.Satori really did not know what to do with his life really.That was until he read a book.what was in that book you ask. Legends of mages,he was fascinated of the craft. So on his 18th  birthday he set out to find a magic teacher.So now were in the present where he traveling on the roads the rest is up to fate to decide.

What are they like (personality)?: - He is courageous,calm,smart,a quick learner,strong, charismatic and quite the lady's man.

What are their ambitions?: - Becoming a master mage sub ambitions becoming a legend in Anthos

Do they have any special skills?: - He has enhanced smelling,hearing and sight

What are their weaknesses?: - He is young therefor impatient  and he is not experience in the wild and in real combat yet.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He is 5'5 he has a lean muscular build he has blue eyes black hair light skin and wears a red and grey/black robes.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - Nope

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://imgur.com/Ct53fvl

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-All your definitions are very vague. Try and expand upon them, maybe use an example?

-Your entire application is filled with punctuation errors.

-Your biography is very short.

-Al'Khazar was in Aegis - and has been destroyed for over 100 years In-character.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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