[Denied]Lycin

[Thatwhoguy 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Angus887

How old are you?: - 12

What time-zone do you live in?: - G.M.T. +12

 

 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I've roleplayed through Garry's Mod and World of Warcraft, but nothing on Minecraft

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - No. I haven't roleplayed on any MC servers.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Yes, http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/105718-lycin/ and http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/105650-application-submission/

 

How did you hear about us?: -I have a few friends that play on the server and they invited me.

What do you think the server will be like? - I have heard a bit from my friends, and I expect lots of friendly people, even if they don't roleplay as a friendly person. I also expect (better said hope) to see lots of wars and other large events. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - I like that you must stay in character. It's what I look forward to in this server.

 

 

Definitions

 

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

 

What is roleplaying?: - To take the role and act as another person or being.

 

What’s metagaming?: - To use information from resources out of game to effect you or your choices in game.

 

What’s powergaming?: - To roleplay in a way that you have control over everything around you. EX.*He instantly appeared behind his enemy and stabbed him in the back. His enemy was instantly dead.*

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: - Lycin

 

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human, hafling, lightfoot

 

What sex are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 29

 

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - As a young child, Lycin decided that it was his destiny to become a famed trader. His parents were farmers, and they owed a market stall in Abresi. Lycin's parents were hard workers, and they never really had company. It was just work all day. One day, his parents went off for a "Buisiness trip", and left Lycin home alone assuming he was old enough. He took this time to get to know some friends. After a week, Lycin began to get worried because his parents had been gone for a long time. A few days later, he received a message that informed him that they had been murded, attacked by a group of orcish bandits. Nothing was left for him in their will.

    

As Lycin grew up, he eventually moved to Kralta. There he lived a happy life, and tended to a nearby farm. He often returned to Abresi to sell his good. He was familiar with the people there and they all were joyful of his arrival. He made an easy living and this process continued for almost 3 years. He eventually made enough money to buy a large amount of land away from nearby civilizations. Now that he owned a lot of land, he mass produced crops and was becoming increasingly wealthy.

 

One day, during one of his trading trips to Abresi, he was stopped by a group of armored Orks blocking a gate. The orks asked for minas in order for him to pass. Lycin tried to convince them to let him pass, but he took enough time for another group of orks to approach on the road behind him. He was now surrounded and the orks asked for all of his products, in addition to all minas he had on him and they would not hurt him. Lycin was forced to give up his products and travel back to his home. After walking this distance, it came to him. Those must have been the orks that killed his parents! Rage overtook him, and he plotted to hire a group and have those orks killed. To this day, he continues his life, but is on the search for people to stop these orks.

 

What are they like (personality)?: - Kind and thoughtful, easy to get along with

 

What are their ambitions?: - To be a wealthy man though the trade of farming, and to find the orks that killed his parents.

 

Do they have any special skills?: - Bribery. He also seems to convince people well.

 

What are their weaknesses?: - Not too skilled in combat, and sometimes has trouble controlling his emotions.

 

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Dark blue eyes, black hair with a balance of fair and rugged. He wears fine brown clothing.

 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No, I think I covered all that is neccessary.

 

 

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  http://i.imgur.com/k7wE76X.png

 

 

 

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

 

-You biography does not include anything about halflings or such, or why halflings would be living in Abresi.

-Having one's parents killed by random orcs or bandits (or in this case, you merged the two together)and than vow revenge upon the group is extremely cliché and unoriginal. Try and have a more sensible or original reason for their demise. Maybe not have the dead at all?

-Lightfoot isn't a valid race or subrace...

-In your biography, you note him farming and trading, yetyou make no note of him at all bribing or having an reason to bribe anyone, yet than you put it down as his notable skill.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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