[Denied][Pending] Second Whitelist App.

[Imi 425]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Imibee

How old are you?: 14

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: LOR, a version of Romecraft.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/114899-pendingapplication/#entry1098421

How did you hear about us?: -Through a friend.

What do you think the server will be like? – A hardcore RP-ing experience.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - The no Rape of sexual violence in RP rule as it is not needed on a server or in society.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:-I do.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):-I understand them all.

Definitions

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: - Taking on the role of a character and acting out different scenarios and situations.

What’s metagaming?: - Using OOC knowledge to affect RP or change an event.

What’s powergaming?: - Forcing an outcome or situation.

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -

Lillian was born in Seventis to a working class merchant family. Her Father would sell goods on market day in a stall, while her mother made fine fabrics to be sold in a quaint little shop. Her Father wanted her to marry early yet Lillian wanted to explore the realms and meet interesting new people from other races and civilisations. She left home in the dead of night, fleeing the trapped future she would surely have.

What are they like? (personality): Lillian is headstrong and strong willed. She is quite adventurous. She also is strongly loyal.

What are their ambitions?: She wishes to explore and one day own a large estate of money and land. She wishes to one day have a family, but to be a well dignified working woman, overcoming the disadvantages to her gender.

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): Lillian is educated and can write and read. She’s also skilled with a knife, something she learnt from working in her family kitchen and training against a tree.

Lillian is quite weak and struggles to life heavy items or do any lasting damage by herself. She is also easily distracted.

Give us a description of how they look?: Lillian has long-ish light brown hair, and forest green eyes. She has fair skin. She usually wears a simple green and grey dress and a pair of worn in leather boots of her father’s hidden under her clothing.

[Heff 2460]

Pending:

-Please write atleast one more paragraph of her life, it lacks any real character to Lillian, not giving me a feel for why her ambitions are what they are,

-Please include other characters names and not just her mom and dad. Add their names and other names to other characters

-Give her marriage a real conflict and reason, did her father want to arrange a marriage with another merchant family? What was their sons name? What was his personality?

-Include atleast 2 other races and one more place besides Seventis

-Expand on definitions if you can

[Heff 2460]

You have 24 hours to do these edits, PM me with any questions

[Heff 2460]

Putting in denied but really accepted due to other complications (posted another app)

[Heff 2460]

Moved to Denied Forum