[Denied]Llora's Application (Retry)

[llora 2]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: llorasec

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 yes (You won’t be denied for being under 13):

Have you applied to this server before? Nope (Please link all past applications):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with all of them equally but to prove I have read them , I like that once in rp the other participant must stay in rp as agreed and only pvp if agreed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? a fellow Uruk

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: the acting out or performance of a particular role or character

What is metagaming?: using knowledge that you OOC may know for example and saying that your character knows although he/she has no way of knowing through rp 

What is powergaming?: powergaming is forcing a rp action or conclusion against another player or npc for example /me chops your entire body in half with one strike , when most likely the opponent may have armour and a weapon to block

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Gorug

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Olog

Character’s age: 35

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Gorug born in Krugmar is a hulking beast of his kind , the origins of his savage combat style leads back to his childhood being a son of a physically impared Olog (Genetics passed on from his Grandfather from the mutilation he had suffered at the burning of the silver city ) his mother however was a great warrior and her genes succeeded over the weaker of his father's afflicted genes.

     Having the extra growth and benefits passed down from his parent there was never a day where he didn't train in combat he would only have a club and what he could fashion from raw materials since he was mocked for his father's disability , he wanted to bash the head in of the son of the clanfather , he was a strange orc , an olog like himself , he would only see the death of his son , in the arena of course as a failure of his skill , the clanfather trained soldiers , being his son does not separate him from failure. he trained till he was age of twenty , going out and fighting raiding parties and bandits , some skilled warriors were sent to hunt him by towns not so far away , which also helped him train.

     The day came , Gorug with his club , suited in his Grandfather's black plate from the silver city , the club fashioned with sharp obsidian tipped iron spikes making it a sort of crude morning star , his opponent , in a much better attire wielding a great-mace , the overseer roared "FIGHT" , time slowed down as the Olog's charged  roaring at each other in blind rage they both swung their weapons and the collided with a large crack as the mace head is knocked off , Gorug doesn't pass the opportunity to win , the blood lust , the adrenaline of the fight , Gorug slams the mace into his opponents leg the spikes tearing the flesh and cracking bone , although letting his guard down the opponent heavy fisted , punches him across the jaw , were it not for his guard on his helmet we would have surely lost then , his opponent fallen over from the injury on his leg he roars looking down at his opponents eyes , before raising his foot and stomping on his head , blood leaked from various openings in his skull as a second stomp finished him , he looked into the silent crowd , the silent respect for his strength slowly growing  as he walks out of the arena picking up whatever food he can carry he grunts and leaves the orcish town , he had no place there anymore (sorry for the extensive detail of the specific battle I just thought i may include it because it was a significant part of his story which shaped the character) 

 

to this day he searches for worthy companions he would fight alongside , looking for a clan who would in turn earn his respect and loyalty in exchange for theirs 

 

Personality Traits: savage fighting , usually happy or hungry , eats his kills

Ambitions: to become a respected high rank or successful warrior

Strengths/Talents: Good with blunt weapons , has a strong jaw biting enemies if needed , extensive labour experience while he was straining

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Gorug is slower than other olog due to his weight and size , due to his fighting in arena's in his past his nose doesn't function very well due to continuous breaking

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 13ft tall , 1.5 tonnes in weight , grey skin , sharpened tusks , broken nose , wears black plate armour over torso with chain mail undercoat 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin

 

http://imgur.com/WRGx1LI

[Wyvernbane 252]

 

-Unanswered questions in OOC section.

-Please Link past applications!

-Meta-gaming definition is plagiarized. 

You have already been warned for such. You have been temporarily

banned. You may re-apply on January 11th.

-Strengths and weaknesses need to be balanced.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!

[Wyvernbane 252]

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