[Denied]My L.o.t.c Application 3

[ESMJ 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: ESMJ

How old are you?: 13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I am.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes here is both the links: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121093-application-2/ https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/121047-denied-my-lotc-application-by-esmj/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Not to hack, hacking just ruins the roleplay experience, and the gaming experience in general. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? A friend told me about it

 

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?: When you play as a person that isn't your self, in a sense acting.

What is metagaming?: When you mix Out of Character(OOC) with in Character (IC) for your own benefit, or advantage.

What is powergaming?: When you force an unreal action on a player, like if you were to kill a player by ripping out their eyes , but they have a helmet on that doesn't allow you to get to there eyes.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Erak Ragnak  

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Erak comes from Athera, and lives in Vanderfell, and is in the nation Kingdom of Akovia, who is also in the the history Modern history Erak is also an only child whose dad died hunting, and mom died in the birth of Erak. Since Erak was born in 1468 he always was a little bit on the evil side. He wasn't to evil but when he didn't control himself, he would bully people, and would always laugh at people when they mess up. He Grew up in Vanderfell, but did travel lots. He especially liked to visit Eruthos Canyon. He nevered moved from Vanderfell but always travelled to other cities in Athera. 

    At the age of 12, Erak was thinking of becoming a mariner, so he could explore and discover more land. Throughout Erak's life there has been many events happening, like in 1479, when the Dwarves retake Kal'Agnar. The most interesting detail about Erak's life is one of the journeys he had on the way to Eruthos Canyon. Erak was 16, when this happened. He was going to the Eruthos Canyon again, for the week to observ. He was on his long journey following his usual route. He was going to prepare for camp for over night, in his usual place. He just finished his fire, and began using it to cook his chicken, when he heard a sound that sounded like someone or thing stepping on a twig. Soon he realised that he had a fire, and that probably was the noise. From behind there was a masked mugger, dressed in all black only wearing a leather tunic  for protection. The mugger finally decided that it was time to come out of the shadows and take whatever he could make some sort of profit on from Erak. The mugger leaped at Erak, but had really bad timing, because Erak just moved from the fire to go prepare another dish so the mugger landed in the fire and whaled in pain. Erak heard the screaming, then came to the muggers aid, because he didn't know the mugger was thinking of mugging him, but was too late because the mugger was too burned to survive.

Personality Traits: Smart, strong, a little mean, lonely.

Ambitions: Money, and discovering more.

Strengths/Talents: Never in the same place, good at parkour, is more aware now, and doesn't have anyone to lose, and is smart and strong.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He is human, so he has the shortest lifespan, and isn't aware of what can injure him.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  He is 6'1, weighs 210lbs, And is muscular.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): Go to: http://i.imgur.com/QrP8ghR.png

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

 

 

You bio still makes little sense

- You parents die of random things early on, no mention of who raised you (cliche)

- You were born in 1468 so it makes you evil? How?

- The mugger part, um. We have no muggers.

- Half naked mugger?

- Burned alive from falling on a campfire? How?

Personality does not match bio

Ambitions need expansion

Strengths are not very good need actually things you are good at

weaknesses are not actual weaknesses and do not balance out strengths

Height is lore breaking

Skin is not appropriate for a fantasy medieval server.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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