[Denied]Application

[Kart20 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TediBB

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Yes - https://www.lordofth...59-application/

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: We do not tolerate trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? : I searched for roleplaying server in Google and i found this server, joined and i found out how great it is so i applied.

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Playing in something like imagination world - with a role and with other peoples. There is a lore and other things (like races, kings, wars, etc.) that enchant the game and make it different from the normal minecraft server. You chose a role and you play as your persona.

What is metagaming?: To use knowledge that your personage doesn't knows to help him by his own turns .

What is powergaming?: To not give fair chance to the others - like Edward gets his sword and slashes the throat of Susan - Susan can not react, because Edward said what happened to her.

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Nathair Silvershadow

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 92

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Nathair was born into Haelun'or in his parents’ house. He grew up with other children and was very happy. He had lots of friends and everybody enjoyed him. Later, they heard that she joined a Druidic guild and lives happily now. Later on one sunny day, when his father was old and sick, Nathair and the rest of his family members sat around him. His father died, happy to see his full family. Nathair lost father at the age of 70. Some days after the funeral the mother of Nathair married seventh time and her husband died mysteriously few weeks after the merrige. His mother now lives happy with tons of pets and a giant garden. The brither of Nathair - Suoshi married to a human and they now live happy in Korovia, Akovia. By his age of 75, Nathair began his journey to Laureh'lin and Korovia, to try to find his brother and to learn new things. He obtained a lot of souvenirs, but while he was returning home he threw them into a river. He was thinking that he doesn't need souvenirs to remember his adventures. He returned home at the age of 83 and he moved from Haelun'or to the village of Leyulin.

Personality Traits: Clever, Magnetic, Egocentric

Ambitions: To get higher in the society

Strengths/Talents: Working with his mind

Weaknesses/Inabilities: he is allergic to fruits (expect pumpkin), working with his hands, swimming, dancing, listening.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): He is high (1 meter and 93 centimeters), thin (79 kilograms), golden hair, aquamarine eyes, pale skin, aquamarine and white clothes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://m.imgur.com/5INfB4X (this is the link to the photo of the skin that i created based on my character ) (the skin had little changes cause i lost it and i recreated it from the picture . Now he have longer hair and other armor over the clothes)

I did my best, i am sorry if the application is still bad :( .

[Tirenas 677]

 

• You need to properly link both of your past applications. The one link you posted doesn't work, and you didn't even mention the other one.
• Your definition of roleplaying and metagaming are still incorrect from your last application.
• The beginning of your biography doesn't quite make sense. It says that someone joined the Druidic Guild, yet doesn't mention who.
• There are a lot of grammatical errors within your writing that still haven't been fixed since your last application. Make sure to revise that upon re-applying.
• Before reapplying, please make sure to take every single thing I've told you into account, as you don't appear to be fixing the issues.

[Tirenas 677]

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