[Denied]Pilotjude's App (For Realsies This Time)

[PilotJude 0]

Apologies. My brother and I share a computer and I forgot to log out of his account and into mine before posting my form. Please delete the original. Thank you :)

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: PilotJude

How old are you?: 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Harassment

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): Nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My brother Bluemadness107

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing as a pre-made character.

What is metagaming?: When you use knowledge that your in-game character should not know to  your advantage.

What is powergaming?: When you make your character do things they aren’t supposed to be able to do according to the form.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Cullasson Airr

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Elvish

Character’s age: 53

Biography: Cullasson grew up as a very sensitive and anti social boy. His father died before he was born, and his mother died of Khorvad’s Grip. He traveled to Thales at a young age and lived there for a little before traveling to going to Athena and settling down in Annil’sul in the district of Haelun’or.

Personality Traits: Serious. Thinks fast under pressure. He doesn’t like other elves or any race for that matter. He much prefers the company of animals and distance from any civilizations.

Ambitions: To create a world away from violence and civilization. A place where he can live with nature and animals.

Strengths/Talents: He is a skilled archer, and is not very good at a sword, but can use one in times of need. He can move fast and move quietly.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He gets very nervous when under pressure or threatened. He is very anti social and has trouble making allies and tends to antagonize himself.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Darkish red hair, chocolate eyes, blond suit. Blondish gray bandanna, 6 feet, 63 pounds.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): https://www.dropbox.com/s/j4h6qjh9ve0vi8v/Screenshot%202015-01-28%2022.20.37.png?dl=0

[D A N N Y 966]

Your application is hereby DENIED for failing to reach the server's standard, this was caused by several reasons, I will go into more detail beneath. Feel free to reapply in 24 hours from now, and better luck next time.

 

Definitions: Your responses were rather limited, and appeared as if you were uncertain - Please 'flesh' out your answers with greater detail. A suggestion would to add an example where possible, otherwise, describe how each term reflects on a player's gameplay on Lord of The Craft.

 

Backstory: Once again, your backstory was rather limited and unsatisfactory. It almost seemed as if it was either rushed, otherwise, little to no effort was placed into it. Rather than stating where your character went, describe how their experiences in those locations impacted them or made them who they are. What did Cullasson do in Thales? Who did he meet? What does Cullasson like to do, how did he discover that he enjoyed this specific hobby?

 

Strengths/Talents: A reminder that your character's strengths and talents don't always have to be physical. An example is being courageous as a last resort - That is a strength, and perhaps just what Cullasson needs in order to persevere in a combat situation.

 

Should you have any questions, feel free to contact me via the forums with a personal message.

[D A N N Y 966]

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