[Denied]Application (2Nd Time)

[justDEWit 133]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: funny981

How old are you?: 11 and about to be 12 years old.

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes I do know

Have you applied to this server before?: Yes I have as stated in the title.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes and I do agree.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You have to act according to your character traits.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: No, I get what all of them mean.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?:Looking on Google for LOTR and roleplay servers.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is when you create a character and play your role in society.

What is metagaming?:When you are using knowledge beyond what your character knows. Like knowing how to use magic even though you aren't a shaman.

What is powergaming?: When people want to go as fast as they can in a game and want to be the best in the game.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Rundon Tiss

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Uruk-Hai

Character’s age: 19

Biography:

       Rundon was only 7 years old and living in a swamp when his father started to train him. His father put him through hard and back-breaking work. As a result he came out as a super-strong and skilled warrior. One day after 10 years of work  he saw a band of 3 heavily armored elves walking by. His father then said, "Prove your strength to me by fighting them off, and you can join the army." Rundon quickly grabbed a axe and sword and ran toward the elves. He threw the axe and killed one elf. He punched the other elf in the face breaking his helmet, then he stabbed the elf. Rundon stood up and looked down on the last elf as he was taller. The elf was scared so he ran away falling over various rocks. His father came up and gave him a bow and arrow, and he said "Prove your marksmanship by shooting this stupid and foolish elf." Rundon shot the arrow, but missed because it hit a tree. His father smacked him and Rundon fell to the floor, and the father said "You will learn of your ancient ancestors and how they NEVER missed a shot." His father told him stories of the Kurg, the Orks ancient ancestors and how vicious they were. He spent 2 years learning military tactics and learned how to make various orc siege and non-siege weapons. 

         Rundon got on a horse and rode to a military camp and walked in to the commanders tent. He said to the commander "Let me join the army, or else." The commander then said, "Fine, an aggressive and strong Uruk, I like that." He joined and became one of the most renowned Uruk soldiers in the camp. He became a trainer and trained the young Uruks as they were going to go into battle when they grew up. Rundon was tired of training little kids and snuck into one of the raid groups. He didn't know they were going to charge into undead territory, but he wasn't scared. He marched with many other Uruk and looked into lots of necromancers and skeletal soldiers eyes. As they all charged, all of the Uruks chanted their war chant. Blood, bones, and swords were all that you could see as battle raged on. After the battle, Rundon, wounded and barely able to walk made it back to the camp. He saw another Uruk and yelled "Ug! Do lat have a potion of healing?" He yelled back "Yub, hurry up before lat is flat!" " After Rundon was healed he said "Rulg lat.",and he walked away into the smoke.

 

Personality Traits: Confident, Bloodthirsty, and Impulsive.

Ambitions: Rundon wants to become a great and renowned leader of the Uruk army.

Strengths/Talents: Good with weapons and tools, Intimidates enemies with his strength, Has a tactical mind since he was trained in war, and dabbles in alchemy so he is able to make potions.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Had very little knowledge education, Doesn't have any interest in talking things out, Gets mad when hurt so he can't control his anger. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Rundon's skin is dark green and has 7 huge teeth. His height is 8' 2" and he weighs 489 pounds. He has bulging muscles as a result of his hard training. He has a loincloth made from some vultures, and has bracers covering his wrists. He also has shoulder pads made from vulture skin also.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot  guide here):(Just double-click on it)Uruk_minecraft_skin-3090702.jpg

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is incoherent, and isnt all too much of a biography, as you just start out when he was seven, and than zoom where he was 17.

 

-You dont include any server lore aside from orcish speak and a mention of Krug misspelled. Please try to add server lore such as what realm he was born in, and where he was born in said realm.

 

-Your powergaming in your character's biography. An single unarmored uruk taking out 3 (in your words) heavilly armored elves.

 

-You're not allowed to commit villainous actions, or be a villain in your application.

 

-I would like to stress that its not ok to harass, spam messages, and 'threaten' application team members. We're people to, we arnt perfect, we make mistakes, yet we do our work. I would ask that you try to take that into consideration as you send messages.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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