[Denied] Maxtonthegreat's Application

[MaxtonTheGreat 5]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: MaxtonTheGreat

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): Nope

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Indeed

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: You need to keep in-character at all times. If you need to use OOC, you can either privately message the player using /t <minecraft name>, or by using Local OOC. This channel can be accessed by putting double brackets before your speech, like this EX: ((Like this. Don't spam Local OOC. Use PMs.))

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): The abuse of racial benefits is simply not allowed. Selecting a race which is not the same as your character's race is considering abusing plugins for an edge in mechanic based combat, doing so will result in the deletion of said persona (persona being the mechanical representation of your character), with no refunds in skills or items.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Jlyloko, a friend.

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a persona and reacting to situations in ways that the character only would.

What is metagaming?: Transferring out-of-game knowledge or talk into the world of roleplay.

What is powergaming?: Working in a way that is highly unrealistic to the scenario and the universe.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Ilkrith Alymar

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 63

Biography  (Please make it a decent paragraph long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don't contradict history.): Beginning as a young quite curious individual, Ilkrith desired nothing more than to fully grasp the wonders of Middle Earth, reading of the lands, studying species, and collecting a great deal of literature (especially Ancient Elven and Ascended). Ilkrith came from an order of Wardens, though having been removed, his father grew more bitter and thus strict to traditional values. He also vowed to have his offspring be upstanding warriors. Omitting the traditional practices of family life, a bitter dynamic was formed between his parents upon the mundane, ritualistic interactions that were loathed by each party. Escaping this, he had a sibling, Illidar, to which he could guide to the wonders of the world, closely bonding with them for a great deal of their life. One day, upon hearing a wild call, he ventured forth into the wilderness. Upon being spotted testing out a nature call, a Wood Elf, named Cyana was to be met; whom he embarked on a life of magic, itinerary, and crafts. While in the forest, the two were spotted collecting ingredients for an enlightenment ritual, and Cyana was captured and executed for trespassing, leaving Ilkrith to flee before persecution. He was also shunned by the community if he were to return.

 

Up escaping to a small hamlet, he began a life of failed interactions, unappreciated artwork, and neglected tune, a new dreary life began. After finding some ties to toy with at the bar, tinkering and crafting was brought up once more. He made quite the stock of items all in the unconscious aims of gifting them to his little sister if he were to find him. One day at a bar, he was spotted accidently taking the stool of a distasteful fellow who had just returned. The man enchanted the drink with a spike of foolery, leaving Ilkrith on a stage crafting a tune and dancing with soon others. Ilkrith had become the spotlight of the scene, causing frustration to boil to a point of the unkind man hurling a shot glass at Ilkrith. The fellow was then reaped of his honorability in the lands, also causing him to no longer have the will to being in the tavern. Left unconscious for two days from falling off of the stage onto his head, Ilkrith left the scene in fear of repeating humiliation that would lead to a possible situation similar to that of his homeland's foul nature toward him. He then began a life of nomadism, making enough to acquire raw materials and living off of trinkets and performances to life a life of wild taverning.

Personality Traits: Ilkrith is an upstanding, romantic individual yet inquiring tinkerer that seeks knowledge and adventure in all forms. He enjoys a great deal of adrenaline-induced encounters to turn into splendid tales as well. He is constantly struggling with rejection and displacement, as almost all folk that he encounters are new faces that have yet to judge him.

Ambitions: He strives to collect volumes upon volumes of literature and trinkets, creating some of his own as well. Ilkrith is driven to be wild and voyaging, living life as it comes with a suave swing to it. He strives to find his sister unconsciously as well. Ilkrith also sees a hidden layer to reality, which is hinted at in his various Ancient readings to which he devotes much of his time to unearthing.

Strengths/Talents: He is intensely socially adapting to surrounding environmental conditions, along with being very cultured yet swashbuckling. Ilkrith has a way with things, always seeing objects as ingredients, inspecting their usefulness and potentials. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Ilkrith greatly suffers from a lack of solid relationships and foundation, having an always shifting livelihood which is both loathed and loved. Despite this becoming less true as he's gone on, he wasn't too terribly successful with people, haunting him throughout all of his travels. He is also traumatized by the execution of his first love along with the scorn of his homeland.

Appearance: Standing at a solid 6 feet and an inch tall, Ilkrith is rather slender yet toned High Elf with brushed-right and up blonde hair. His skin reflects the shade of the moon, and his aqua eyes pierce the day. He wears garments of a traveling mage and craftsman, tainted tan and a deep grey. Pouches of all kinds are always at the ready.

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Thank you for your time.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

Reasons:

• Definitions need to be expanded and elaborated on.
• This server is not set in the LOTR universe, please look on the wiki to grasp the universe we are set in.

This app overall was /really/ impressive apart from the character actually being from LOTR. Please fix these mistakes and re-post after the 24 hour denial period. If you have any questions, please PM me.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

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