My 3rd Application

[Kiki 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: ilovecupkake

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Oklahoma

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:No

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Minecraft Forums

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/73038-application/ and http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/73100-my-2nd-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role playing is when you perform an act as a person. For example, "Kiki is a funny and happy type of girl"

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: certain types of attack or defense based on the strengths and weaknesses of an opponent that the player's character is unaware of. For example, analyzing an enemy's statuses can help you find their weaknesses.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Forcing the result if one character's actions on another character's actions. For Example, it could be like "Person1 annihilated Person2", Or "Person1 cured Person2".

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kiyu or Kiki

Character Race:Woodland Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Kiki is a 12 year old girl who loves adventures. Kiki has red hair and blueish-greenish eyes. She was really young when she lost her sister, Aqua, to the darkness. Kiki is an expert sword wielder. She wields the Sword of Hope. Kiki is full of darkness, heart and blood, but she somehow maintains a light spirit. When she was young, she started training at the royal sword academy, even though she wasn't royal. Kiki has many experiences with battling. She has a lot of potential too. She loves fighting off enemies and helping her friends and helpless people. Kiki always hopes that she will find her sister, Aqua, one day. Kiki will not stop fighting off darkness and enemies until everyone is safe.

What are your characters ambitions?:To keep her friends safe and fight the darkness.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://postimage.org/image/hq6k1zset/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:The skin might change soon

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?Kiki walks up to the poor dwarf. He looks exhausted, and looks like he is going to pass out. Kiki looks around his shop, when the dwarf suddenly falls to the ground. Kiki waits for someone to help him, but no one does. Kiki runs to him and says, " I think that you should take a break instead of working so hard. I will take your place and you get some rest".

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?Kiki walks up to the Orc. Kiki tries to reason with the Orc by saying"I don't think that we should get so violent here, so, remain calm and don't fight". But the Orc doesn't listen to Kiki. Instead, he pushes Kiki away and Kiki falls to the ground. Kiki says "Well, that was rude" and draws out her sword. The Orc squeals and runs away. The dwarf thanks Kiki and walks off. Kiki smilies and walks away too.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:Kiki looks at the poor man. She waits for someone to notice the man. One person walks up to the man and steals some coins. The man is helpless. Kiki runs after the man and catches him. Kiki says "I don't think you should steal, that can make you end up in the dungeons. Kiki lets the thief go and goes to the man who sits there, crying. Kiki goes to the man and gives him the coins. "Here is your coins. Sorry I didn't help earlier. But next time, be careful" . The man thanks Kiki and walks away.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [ ]

Did not post on MinecraftForums [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [X]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Taken from:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metagaming_(role-playing_games)

Your definition for metagaming was plagiarised off of Wikipedia. Please note, this is both illegal and rude to the original author of the definition. You have been banned from applying for one (1) month. Please take this time to rewrite your application, especially in the biography department. "Sword of Light" and "the darkness" are very vague terms. Please relate them to actual lore in Asulon.

If you need any help, you're free to contact me. I'll be more than happy to help you write your next one, even if you are banned from applying for a month.

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Noteworthy Hints and Resources:

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Taiga 764]

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