[Denied]Applicaation For Shan Mogun

[Doofenbear 0]

 What’s your Minecraft

Account Name?: -  Doofenbear

How old are you?: -
 12

What time-zone do you
live in?: -  Central-American time

 

Have you ever
roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes on another server and in reallife

 

Have you been on any other
roleplaying servers?: - yes

 

Have you applied to
this server before?(Please link past applications): -no

 

How did you hear about
us?: - I was watching my brother play and got intrested

 

What do you think the
server will be like? -  awesome

 

Have you read and
agreed to the rules?: - yes

 

What’s your favourite
rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  Don't break the server's lore

 Definitions

 

This is simply so that
we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free
to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own
words, not another website / person's!

 

What is roleplaying?:
-  Playing as another person.

 

What’s metagaming?: -
Using knowledge in character, that the character doesn’t know, only you outside
character.

 

What’s powergaming?: -
When you force another character to do something that is unrealistic or he/she wouldn’t do

 

In-Character
Information

 

Now you actually make
your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and
that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want
to play. 

 

What’s your character
called?: -  Shan Mogun

 

What race are they
(and sub-race)?: - Northener Human

 

What sex are they?: -
Male

 

How old are they?: -
24

 

Give us a brief
description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore
when writing): - Shan grew up with his father and mother inspringford, his
father was a famous gladiator back in the day, so they had enough money to
spent. Shan also learned from his father to fight with an axe (his father's
weapon of choice). Shan spent plenty of time playing with the slimes that lived
outside of Kingston. He was very happy with his life. Years past, and one a day
everything changed, when they were out of Springford  for a stroll, some dwarves showed up and
started shooting them, his mother was shot through her heart by an archer,
while Shan was shocked by the death of his mother, his father dragged Shan out
of the enemy fire. When they ran for their lives his father was shot by a
dwarven archer, and couldn't walk anymore. Shan had to carry him all the way
outside of the archers's sight. But it was too late, he lost too much blood.
His last words were: "Show the world who you really are." Now Shan is
traveling the world, trying to grant his father his last wish while trying to
find his brother Tanzi.

 

What are they like
(personality)?: - Kind and he makes a lot of jokes, but he is very shy , so if
he encounters someone, he acts immediately superstitions , he doesn't want to take any
risks, if he is 100% sure that he/she isn't hostile, he is willing to talk
to him or her. 

 

What are their
ambitions?: - Let the world know who Shan Mogun is by helping everyone who
needs it.

 

Do they have any
special skills?: - He has gained strength because of his training with his
father where he also learned to fight with an axe and is a great woodsman

 

What are their
weaknesses?: - he is very scared of hights and water, he can't stand it.

 

Give us a description
of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Long brown hair and he wears his
father's old gladiator armor

 

Anything else you want
to say about them?: - He loves axes because he played with them alot when he was around age 10
especially outside of Springford

 

Please give us a
screenshot of your character’s skin: - is attached to this application  yes

 

 

[Nug 2011]

Sadly, I must deny this application for the following reason(s):

• The definitions are incredibly short and could use a lot more effort, please lengthen them. Remember to write them in your own words.
• The story makes zero sense, why would a group of dwarves with no motive randomly approach a family and start shooting at them? Include more detail and change or fix the way your character's parents died. Also, please don't make up settlements like Springford, go to the Wikipedia or another source for locations to use.
• If your character is wearing armor, why doesn't his skin match up? Please make sure the skin matches the character.

You may reapply 24 hours from this post.

[Nug 2011]

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