[Denied]Application

[ninjaclimb1 432]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - ninjaclimb1

How old are you?: - 9

What time-zone do you live in?: - gmt

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes i was playing a vampire trying to persaude a human to let me in

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yep (massivecraft)

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - yes i have

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/101213-application/#entry924692

How did you hear about us?: - watching hammy on youtube

What do you think the server will be like? - Really good because i like roleplay

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yep

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - Dont abuse glitches

Definitions

This
is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know
about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that
you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Were you put yourself in youR characters shoes

What’s metagaming?: - Were you use previously gained knowledge to your advantage

What’s powergaming?: - Were you put something like bob stabbed john in the head

in roleplay you should put  bob attempted to stab john in the head. But john managed to dodge it

In-Character Information

Now
you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable!
Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with
a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Jie

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human (sub race Northerner)

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: - 18

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - He was born with a very pale skin and he got bullied at school because of it so he only had 2 freinds but when he was 14 he had a argument with then and ran away and he kept running till a adventurer said Stop running just explore the world and enjoy it So he did that and ever since then he adventured the world and fought mosters

What are they like (personality)?: - Very shy because of his pale skin

What are their ambitions?: - to find a city to call home and have his own house and money

Do they have any special skills?: - very good with a sword and bow

What are their weaknesses?: - he is shy so dosn't  talk very mutch

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - riped up clothes and pale skin and blue eyes

 
Anything else you want to say about them?: -  no thats all

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

I'd like to see you expand on your definitions. They aren't entirely incorrect but I feel like you could add to them to be more clear with your answering.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Your biography is vague and lacks server lore. I'd like to see you expand on it and add more server lore throughout.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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