[Denied]Application For Alfar Oakfall

[Alfar Oakfall 5]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - adam_797

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - GMT +2

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Yes, other role playing servers and in real life.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/86161-application/

How did you hear about us?: - A friend told me

What do you think the server will be like? -  A exiting role playing experience with big cities, battles and maby some friends. 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes i have read and agreed to all the rules.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - That you have to keep in-character at all times.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - role playing is when you have to play/act as another person or thing.

What’s metagaming?: - its a term used to define any strategy/action/method in a game that will effect the game, so its like the in-game decisions. 

What’s powergaming?: - its a sort of style of interacting with games that has a aim of increasing progress to a goal.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Alfar Oakfall

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human    Northerner

What sex are they?: - male

How old are they?: - 25

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Alfar lived with his family in the wild just a bit out of the great human city of Galahar. They came and built a farm there when Alfar was only 2  years old, Alfars perants told him they were fishermen before they came here but Alfar always sespected they were lieing but Alfar  just went with their story. As Aflar grew his father taught him how to live i  the wild and use a sword. He was happy with his life, they worked on the farm and took the food they grew to the different cities of the Oren empire , sold the food and bought other supplies. One day Alfar left to sell goods on his own and when he came back his family was dead he was overwelmed with sadness but more importantly angry. He ran into the forest and looked for the ones that killed his family and found 2 orcs with his fathers sword. Alfar killed them and from that day he hated orcs. 

What are they like (personality)?: - He is a brave and strong but a humble warrior that likes roaming the wild for adventure. He is not the wisest of all but has a sense of strategy.

What are their ambitions?: - He would like to become a greate warrior and maby even a gereral even though that sounds unlikely he is not giving his dream up.

Do they have any special skills?: - He is a good gatherer and warrior for he lived in the forest.

What are their weaknesses?: - He is bad with a bow and trade.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  He is a sturdy, muscular, light skined northerner with blue eyes and black hair.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No nothing else.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  I attached the file.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Your definitions are a bit vague and your powergaming one isn't entirely correct. I'd like to see you expand on them on your next application.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here. The link can be found here.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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