[Denied]Application

[froyoslomo 6]

"The world will be cleansed in fire"

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - FroYoSloMo

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - Pacific

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Somewhat

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: - I was looking around for a good RP server

What do you think the server will be like? - Large, detailed, full of interesting characters and respectful people

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No Flaming

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Taking the role of a character 

What’s metagaming?: - Unknown

What’s powergaming?: - Unknown

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Solaris (originally: Vincent Price)

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - Physically, 35

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Vincent was a wealthy adventurer who inherited a vast sum of money at a young age. He grew up in a very harsh environment, having to take over his father's business. Over time he grew into a cold individual, who embraced underhanded tactics, and ran a large criminal underworld. On an expedition to a mysterious temple in the Karakatua Jungle, Vincent's escorts were attacked by a pack of Tuark. Vincent, in his terror, ran into the temple, and found himself lost inside its dark caverns. It wasn't until days later, that the near death adventurer was led into a room by a faint glimmer of sunlight. Inside, was a suit of armor, covered in strange designs, with a strange stone adorned on the front, below a dome that contained what appeared to be a miniature sun. Vincent approached the armor, and was blinded by its radiance, and fell unconscious. When he awoke, he was Solaris, an ageless entity that took a new host every millennium, so that it may serve the defend Andros from the evil that can walk in the sun.

What are they like (personality)?: - Will go out of his way to defend those in danger. Besides this, he is very one-dimensional. Only when those he considers family or friend will he show any real emotion toward, sometimes, freeing his old personality

What are their ambitions?: - Defend any and all who ask for his help. He defends kingdoms, villages, anyone in danger from evil that does not fear the light.

Do they have any special skills?: - The armor he wears is powered by the sun. His strength is doubled in direct sunlight. Even at night, he is a formidable opponent. His armor is luminescent. Imbues fire aspect into his weapon 

What are their weaknesses?: - Much weaker at night, dark magic users have an advantage.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - Wears a full suit of gold, orange, and red armor, has a sun symbol on the front.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - Having trouble with computer, and can't find a way to post screenshot. i apologize the inconvenience. i hope the lack of a screenshot doesn't ruin this application



Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

 

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

You cannot put unknown for your definitions. You have to fill them out or all of your applications will be denied.

 

Your armor cannot be directly powered by the sun. This would not go with lore and would need to be done in roleplay, not just made up.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

 

[cruzazul 2815]

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