Olaf Freyr: Classic Brist

[Jachnun 566]

((Alright guys, I have recently been thinking of making a new sort of forum series. The series will mainly be about my new Bristiric character, Olaf Freyr. Olaf is a classic unintelligent Brist. The series will be about some of his stories and moments in life. Please give me feedback of what you think.))

 

Olaf At The Tavern:

 

It was midnight in Cavan, and Olaf found him self at the local tavern. Olaf was studying his stone mug of mead as he was sitting in front of the tavern's counter. He continued studying his mug as if the loud and crowded tavern did not disturb him. Olaf heard a chuckle, and then looked up at the man behind the counter. The man asked him "Enjoyin' ya self laddie?" Olaf begins examining his mug again saying "Me tryin' to studeh' teh mug if ya don't mind?" The man behind the counter takes a piece of cloth as he begins to clean the counter with it saying "Its just a damn mug, mate." Olaf gets up with his mug as he says "If ya don't mind, im leavin' now" then Olaf mutters "Het' when people disterb' meh..." The man shrugs at Olaf. As soon as Olaf began walking away from his chair he felt a slight bump on the floor as he falls down to the ground dropping his mug as well. The mug immediately shattered into pieces of stone, and then the whole tavern stood silent. The man behind the counter glared at Olaf saying "The **** is wrong with ya?!" Olaf gets up as he cleans the dust off of his clothes, as the man behind the counter yells "Ya payin' for this ya dimwit, its ya fault after all!" Olaf looks down at the bump saying blankly "It aint' me fault, sa." The man then slams his fist as he screams in an angry manner "What ya mean it aint ya fault?! Ya dropped teh' damn mug!" Olaf says as if the man is an idiot "Ya floor is messed up, mate." The man then climbs up on the counter, and then jumps off of it standing in front of Olaf. The man then begins stepping closer to Olaf, as Olaf swallows his spit since he was terrified of the man. The man then goes to grab Olaf by his shirt, as he lifts Olaf from the ground. The man says "Ya pay for teh' mug, or I beat the hell out of ya." Olaf then raises a brow as he raises his finger up in question saying in a very smooth way "What if I dunnae, have teh' money?" The man thought that Olaf was joking as he asks "Ya tink' tis is a bloodeh' joke?" Olaf presses his lip as he asks since he didn't know the answer to the question "Yes?" The man roars as he throws Olaf to the floor. A loud thud was made as Olaf hit the floor. The man then whistles saying "Oi! Cm'ere lads!" after the whistle 3 big Brist men showed up from the brewery behind the counter. Olaf knew that a fight was going to happen, so he picked up a sharp shard from his mug as he held it tightly in his hand. The man chuckles and says "I am going teh' enjoy this." Then the man begins stretching as he says to Olaf "Aight' git up." Olaf gets up making his serious face saying "Have ya ever heard of teh' most emportant element of fighten'?" The man raises a brow as he asks as if Olaf is an idiot "No?" Olaf chuckles as he tries to seem smooth "Tis element of..." Olaf then puts his right foot forward throwing his shard without aiming, as the shard is thrown up and after 5 seconds falls down 2 steps from the man then yells "SURPRISE!". The man chuckles as he says "IS tat' all ya got?" Olaf looks around trying to seem smooth though he is nervous saying "Ummm..." then Olaf thought of an idea and says confidently "No!" The man then glares at Olaf saying "Then wot is it?" Olaf then makes a sly smile and then says "This..." Olaf then begins running out of the bar with haste saying "See ya later! And fix teh' damn floor!" The man then chases him out of the bar and says "Come back er' ya ***** bastard!" The man continued chasing Olaf as Olaf yelled "I will pay ye back! Leave me alone!" The man continued to chase Olaf for the remainder of that night, until Olaf managed to hide enough to make the man go insane and leave him alone.

 

THE END. 

 

 

Edit: forgot to add this. IF anyone wants to join the Bristiric culture and support house Dunham, the link below has the Bristiric lore, chronicles and also the application thread. 

 

Link:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/99088-the-bristiric-chroniclesapplication-thread/

[iris1612 1780]

(( Very nice writing, well written. I look forwards to the next one. ))

[Jachnun 566]

(( Very nice writing, well written. I look forwards to the next one. ))

((Thanks man, much appreciated))

[comanderbly^ 499]

olaf freyr reminds me of...................... a crow guard................................ and....................my server............and ******* PLAYERKILLER32!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

get your own name

 

Seriously, get don't plagiarize players from my server or any server, don't use their names without their permission.

[lιoɴ 248]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.