[Denied]Application

[pixelmist 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - PixelMist

 

How old are you?: - 14

 

What time-zone do you live in?: -  pacific 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - no i haven't 

 

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - no i haven't

 

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/104241-application/

How did you hear about us?: - i searched up 'minecraft roleplaing servers' on google

 

What do you think the server will be like? -  i think it will be great and very unique despite the fact that its very different from all the other regular servers

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes i have read and agree to all the rules

 

What’s your favorite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  my favorite rule is how us players need to confirm a fight before we kill one another  

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  roleplaying is where you need to act out your character and just live life like you actually would in the real world 

What’s metagaming?: -  metagaming is using OOC info and IC

What’s powergaming?: - power gaming is not giving some one a chance to respond to an emote 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Tash

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  human

What sex are they?: -  male

How old are they?: -  24

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - tash grew up in Salvus, And he was a hard worker. his mother was very smart and very wise, while his father was one of the best warriors in the city. Tash always wanted to grow up and be as strong as his father and as wise and strong willed as his mother. he had all the potential to be both of what his parents had, he just had to stop trying so hard and just be him. he tried so hard to make his father proud but his father wanted him just to be himself and not try so so hard on all the little things. tash still doesn't know tht. when the town was overRaned by orcs everyone died but tash. his parents protected him while he ran off. and now he starts his adveture from there..

 

What are they like (personality)?: -  his personality is very strong willed and good to be around

What are their ambitions?: -  ambitions is strength, smart, and never gives up

Do they have any special skills?: -  good with swords

What are their weaknesses?: -  is to be alone (out numbered)

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  strong bright blue eyes, leather clothing, and a marking  on his clothing tht represents his family

Anything else you want to say about them?: - he likes to meet new people, like to be friends with others, likes to fight, and he likes to help.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -http://imgur.com/xKjBEuP

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-All your definitions are very short - try and expand upon them. Maybe use an example?

-Your biography is a tad incoherent, and is filled with typos near the end.

-The "My parents were killed by orcs" backstory is easily one of the most cliché and overused backstories around.

-Your ambitions say "Ambitions is strength, smart, and never gives up."

Those appear to be moreso character traits which he apparently already has... And the correct way to phrase that is: "His ambitions are to be strong, smart, and to never give up". See? doesn't that make sense?

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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