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[Kingaff96 7]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Kingaff96 How old are you?: - 17 What time-zone do you live in?: - Costal Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Ive Roleplayed as a OrcKing And As A Knight And scout on other's. Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - well yes ha-ha one i use to own and one i sorta own now Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no i have not. How did you hear about us?: - Through DarkLord2002 What do you think the server will be like? - well hopefully being the worlds number 1 role play server it will be the best rp i have experienced Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - You can't use any client-side modifications that give you an advantage over other players, like; speed-hacking, x-ray vision, fly-hacking. You can however, use things such as More Player Models and Rei's Mini-Map which we encourage you use What is roleplaying?: - Roleplay is creating a fictional character and putting your self into there shoes and makeing the desions that they would make speak as they would speak and act as they would act. What’s metagaming?: - Metagameing obtaining information about a number of things for example a legendary sword in OOC and then makeing you character know this in RP What’s powergaming?: - Powergameing is preety much creating a over powerd or "God" character by doing things without actually doing them for example. A steals B's Minas and walks away undetected. not even giveing B even a chance to respond. What’s your character called?: - Shurkul Varumbar What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Orc What sex are they?: - Male How old are they?: - 19 Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Shurkul Varumbar was born into Clan Varumbar a small clan back in the days of Asulon Near the The Waz Uzg his clan was only a minor clan run by his father. Skrkul was only a small orc when most of his clan was wiped out by the Humans in a raid attempt to take out the settlement most of his clan laid dead and him Burnd and ingured burnd cut blind in one eye and filled with hate everything was ruin. All of a Sudden Skurkul head a mans Voice shout "Men Doubble through the area i do not want a single orc breathing make she the scum is wiped out" Skurkul started run into the forrest and just kept running till the poin that he could not run and collapced Skurkul woke um in a small room sleeping in a bed in the cornor sat a man in a chair. Skurkul lunged up as to attack but was stoped by his own pain. the man starts to speak i found you in the forrest unconcius and i saw the smoke form a distance you were burnd and bleed so i brought you hear i have treated your burns ot the best i know how and i have stoped your bleeding but as for your eye i cant do anything. Skurkul says nothing. the man gets up and starts to walkout the door. Skurkul quitely says "tha.... Thank your. The man turns and smiles and then leaves. to this very day Skurkul has learnd the mans name Kieffer Devita. Skurkul now Holds a Rage for the Oren empire that no amount of deaths may it be a 1000 times over will not be enough for them. What are they like (personality)?: - He holds alot of rage to most humans but holds a serious relationship with the man who saved him and the others who follow this man. What are their ambitions?: - His ambitions are to see the Entire Oren empire Fall at the orcs feet Do they have any special skills?: - He is extreemly skilled at scouting and Archary. What are their weaknesses?: - He has a fear of loseing everyone all over again Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - a green orc like m.ost others Coverd in Burns and scares Anything else you want to say about them?: He is very angry :D

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-Your application literally has no spacing. Thus making it very hard to read.

-Your application is full of spelling, and punctuation errors.

-Your metagaming definition is a fair bit off, try and expand upon it.

-Your character's weakness isn't moreso a weakness than it is a simple fear, more than simply a fear of losing his friends.

-Your biography is hard to follow, and doesn't really make sense.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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