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[Denied]The Bio Of Sevran Bowstring

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The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  Legoface123
How old are you?: - 10
What time-zone do you live in?: -  Gmt (Greenwich mean time)


Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: -  Yes 
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes on two servers Eurasia and  Eresia.
Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): -  5th time


How did you hear about us?: - Via Youtube and Minecraft 
What do you think the server will be like? -  A fun lord of the ring themed role play experience
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  No powergaming


Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Creating a character and playing as them in a fictional land .

What’s metagaming?: -  Speaking with knowledge you are not supposed to have. For example you friend has told you on  skype that the orcs are going  to attack Oren so you warn  all of the city.

What’s powergaming?: -  Saying that your character can do impossible things. For example that Moronians can block bullets with their hands.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Sevran Bowstring.

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Human, Northerner.

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  23

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  Sevran never really knew where he came from, his Step Father always said that he was found in the Dwarven city of  Kal'azgoth and was brought to the city of Abres, where he grew up.  His mother was called  Alice and his father was called Greylum, they were both hunters and did what they had to do to raise their family. Sevran had two brothers one called Malex and the other was called Ryan. When Sevran arrived  Malex was aged 19 and was a  fisherman but Ryan was he same age as Sevran and they became close.  When Sevran and Ryan were 10 his father taught them how to hunt  and climb, they both picked it up quickly and soon were masters of it.   When Sevran was 20  a bunch of adventurers came to the local inn and told stories about life in the Wilds Sevran thought with his skills that he could do well in the wilds adventuring and decided that was the life for him.So he set off on an adventure and has been travelling ever since, trying to make his fortune.

What are they like (personality)?: -  Happy, brave, determined and likes a good chat.

What are their ambitions?: -  To travel around Anthos and hopefully find fortune and a nice place to live.

Do they have any special skills?: -  Good with a bow and arrow  and a great climber.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Terrified of undead and susceptible to illness.  

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Brown hair, blue eyes, normal human size.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -  Sevran is ok with a sword but not the best.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  This is the link  http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/medieval-boy-2747274/

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-Your biography is much too short.

-Your biography is incoherent, and hard to follow.

-Your biography simply says that at 10 - his dad taught him how to climb and hunt... And thats all... Hunt what? Climb up what? Doing what? And even why would his father teach him how to hunt and climb randomly?

-You need to expand on your character's personality.

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.
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