[Denied]Application

[TNTcreeper 7]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - TNTcreeper25

How old are you?: - 13

What time-zone do you live in?: - Central Standard Time. (I think?)

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - I don't think so..

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Maybe, although, I wouldn't remember.

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - Nope.

How did you hear about us?: - I was browsing the internet, and found this server.

What do you think the server will be like? - I do not understnad what you mean by this..

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes, I agree with the rules.

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - No bullying, or hacking.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - the acting out or performance of a particular role, either consciously (as a technique in psychotherapy or training) or unconsciously, in accordance with the perceived expectations of society with regard to a person's behavior in a particular context. I got that from Google.. :3

What’s metagaming?: - I have no idea.

What’s powergaming?: - Again, I have no idea.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - "Sir Ataric Kyfrium II"

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Human

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 21

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Hmm.. His mother died when he was 11, and his father died when he was 16. And he has had his girlfriend to take care for him, and she's one of the few people he can truely trust. They've known eachother since he was 14.

What are they like (personality)?: - Wise, smart, couragous, kind, compasionite, and merciful. He would willingly give his life for his girlfriend.

What are their ambitions?: - To have a good life, help others, and become a great honorable man.

Do they have any special skills?: - Well, he's very wise, smart, and strong.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Hmm.. He'd rather die then have his girlfriend die. I dunno if that can be considered a weakness.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  Uhh.. He has brown hair, blue eyes, arrow quiver, a hood, a light greyish blue, leather tunic, and leggings, over chanmail. With a symbol on the front of his tunic: (Why is it so small??) He also has leather gloves over his hands. And leather boots. And that's about it, I guess. If any more info is needed, I'll give it. :)

Anything else you want to say about them?: - No, that is all.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -  Here's my current skin: http://imgur.com/dmqEAtZ,jva4UX1,xbc8g7j

IF ANY FURTHER INFORMATION IS NEEDED, JUST ASK!

Fantastic, there you go. No need to write any more - simply post this on our forums (and on MinecraftForum like it says above) and wait!

 

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been  denied  and I'm giving you a verbal warning for plagiarism: 

 

- Plagiarising any part of your application is against the rules and will result in a 1 week ban per offense in future. Never directly copy from any other source; always use your own words.

 

Reasons for denial:

 

- You plagiarised your roleplaying definition. Even if you admitted to it, it's still against the rules. Please do not do this again.

 

- For "What do you think the server will be like?", we simply want to know what you expect from the server and what sort of experience you think you'll gain from it.

 

- You have not given any definitions for Metagaming and powergaming. Please give a full answer to both of these definitions. You may research their meanings any way you wish, even by using Google, but do not directly copy from anywhere; Use your own words!

 

- Your biography is very short and extremely vague. What happened to his parents? Who is his girlfriend, and what's the story behind them meeting? What about the rest of his life, where's all the story from there? You need to write at least 2 paragraphs of biography for it to be acceptable. Please expand on your character's life and add some events that have had an impact on them to make them in to who they are today.

 

- There is no server lore in your biography. Please include a sufficient amount of server lore, including at least a couple of towns/cities and mention of a few of the other races. Keep in mind, we currently live in the realm of Anthos and your character is just 21, so only lore relevant to there should be applicable. If you need help finding server lore, use our official wiki here: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- Your weakness is a little debatable; Unless you already have a friend ready to play your character's girlfriend in-game, we won't ever be seeing the two together which renders your weakness rather pointless. Please change your weakness so that it is more like a genuine flaw that could put them at a disadvantage in particular situations.

 

Your application is nice so far, and I can see you're quite eager to be accepted, but it does need a lot of work. Please spend a fair amount of time fixing each of the points above to maximise your chances of acceptance. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

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