[Denied]Whitelist Application #3T

[Turian5 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: -  turian_
How old are you?: -  12
What time-zone do you live in?: -  GMT + 3

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - In RPG's and other rp servers.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: -  Uthrandir
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications):-http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/85377-human-turian/  ,  

How did you hear about us?: - Planet Minecraft
What do you think the server will be like? - Awesome
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: -  Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: -  Have skins that correspond to the RP

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: -  Playing a role.

What’s metagaming?: -  Using things that aren't in game to help in game

What’s powergaming?: -  Focusing all your time to one thing in game

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: -  Fard Bolger

What race are they (and sub-race)?: -  Halfling

What sex are they?: -  Male

How old are they?: -  22

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): -  His parents were normal halflings in Lenfarthing. They were farmers  but when they got a son  they quit . When Fard was 10 he was a little smaller than the others but his parents told him that he would be taller than the rest at somepoint. He loved to hang out in  Ferry Forest. When he turned 20  he had lived a pretty normal halfling life.

What are they like (personality)?: -  Has a good sense of humor. Is a little greedy and is a lazy guy.

What are their ambitions?: -  Become the richest person in Anthos, And maybe go on an adventure.

Do they have any special skills?: -  Can eat 2 pumpkins in 10 minutes.

What are their weaknesses?: -  Isn't that powerful and is a coward.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: -  has green eyes and brown hair. Usually wears brown pants and a green shirt. Has a jacket  that is red.

Anything else you want to say about them?: -  Nah

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Your application has been...

-Your meta-gaming, and powergaming definitions are wrong.

-You need to expand upon your roleplay definitions.

-Your biography is much too short.

-Your biography is incoherent, and hard to understand.

-you need to expand upon your character's strengths, description, and weaknesses.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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