[Denied]Loganbecton App

[TheReaper 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - LoganBecton
How old are you?: - 17
What time-zone do you live in?: - EST

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - Not really.
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - Yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: - Searched on google.
What do you think the server will be like? - Very interesting.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - You may not perform any villainous activities in your application.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - Acting as a character that you have designated,

What’s metagaming?: - Playing out of character

What’s powergaming?: - When a player tries to influence how another player acts or to annoy them.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Logan

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - A half-breed of a High Elf and a Kha'Pantera, mainly having the characteristics of his Elven half.

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 17

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - 

What are they like (personality)?: - Kind and intelligent (to a degree)

What are their ambitions?: - To seek adventure and excitement in known and unknown lands.

Do they have any special skills?: - Jack-of-all-trades, being able to do whatever needs to be done at the time.

What are their weaknesses?: - Fatal wounds able to be inflicted on the body.

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - He wears a cloak at the moment which shrouds his face, only showing his green eyes, one unusually lighter than the other. He wears a red shroud around his face and shoulders, protecting him from the cold and his identity from others. On his back he carries a sling of arrows, ready for the time that he needs to make a stealthy kill from afar.

Anything else you want to say about them?: - He is able to be both agile and relatively strong, and is rather well trained in most combat techniques.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://tinyurl.com/m3to6tb

[Gwonam_Blaze 385]

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

- Your roleplaying definition could use a bit more detail, and your metagaming and powergaming definitions are both incorrect. Please give us the full correct meanings of both and use this page for research (remember to use your own words!): http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying

 

- Kharajyr cannot produce offspring with other races, therefor it is impossible for your character to be a halfbreed of Kharajyr and anything else.

 

-  Your character must be at least 18 in your application (I know it's only 1 year difference, but I'm afraid I can't ignore it).

 

- You have written absolutely nothing for your biography. You must write at least 2 paragraphs, telling us about your character since their early life and growing up in to who they are today. Be sure to include plenty of interesting but not cliche or ridiculous events and plenty of server lore. If you need help finding server lore, check out our official wiki: http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/

 

- Your skills are what we consider 'Godmoding' or 'Being a Gary-Stu'; Being able to do anything at any time you need is quite unfair since it makes you considerably more potent than other characters, to the point where it's unfair. Your character must have a few particular skills and you must explain how they acquired them in your biography.

 

- Your weakness is not really a weakness; Everyone is susceptible to fatal wounds. A weakness must be a fairly unique trait to your character that could put them at a disadvantage in certain situations.

 

- The link to your skin doesn't seem to work. Please make sure we are able to see the 3D image of your skin in your next application. If you need help getting one, check out this guide: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/51343-how-to-obtain-your-skin-screenshot/

 

Your application isn't too bad, but it does need a lot of work. Spend plenty of time making sure you've fixed all of the points I've provided before posting your next application, especially the biography (brief description of their life), considering you had completely left this out. You may re-apply in 24 hours. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message/PM me!

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