[Denied]Lavender's Application 2

[Glitter 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application! Simply answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit better.

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - GlitterPearl9
How old are you?: - i'm nearly 10
What time-zone do you live in?: - austrailian eastern standerd time

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - yes on a game caled roblox
Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - http://www.lordofthe...rs-application/

How did you hear about us?: -my sister
What do you think the server will be like? - fun, magical, amazing, interesting
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - 

• Both sides must agree to the type of fighting you're using - PvP or RP fighting. If an agreement cannot be reached, the type that is preferred by the majority of combatants will be used. If there is no majority, PvP is default. The majority is defined as the party that outnumbers the minority, even if only by 1 individual (so if 4 people want RP and 3 want PvP, the majority is in favor of RP and thus it's an RP fight). Before commencing a PvP fight, you must roleplay leading up to it, and you must also make the other player aware before you attack - e.g. an emote.

 

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - roleplaying is stepping into anothers shoes of a persona of which you made up or wish to be

What’s metagaming?: - is using ooc info to win fights or help a friend who tells you that they need to be revived about 300 blocks away and black maling some one to do something

What’s powergaming?: - is doingn action without alowing the player the ablity to fight back or defend themself so if you stab a player in the heart thay would not beable to fight back

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Lavender

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - elf sub-race half wood elf half high elf

What sex are they?: - female

How old are they?: - 79

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing): - Lavender comes from a family of mixed elfs her mothers name is Poppy and is a high elf her fathers name  is Daragon and is wood elf. she was born in a tree house of Malinor. when she was 8 years old she farmed and her parents loved her talent. when she got older thay said she could go on a adventurer on her own. whith her athleticism she could run for ages(have food on me)she some times would steal if thay need to. 

What are they like (personality)?: - cheeky, mischievous, friendly

What are their ambitions?: - to become a farmer and a adventurer

Do they have any special skills?: - athletic
What are their weaknesses?: - wolves, Golden swords

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - brown hair, dark green eys, green and brown clothes, flower hat, black shoes, brown arm bands

Anything else you want to say about them?: - loves cats and rain,adventures round,loves to farm

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://www.minecraft...0/elven-female/

 

[Daisy 9739]

 

As far as I can tell you have not changed anything from your last application, and thus the previous verdict stands, with a few things I would like to note as well.

 

- Lack of grammar/vocabulary/proofreading and other various English techniques.

Please, for the sake of whoever reviews your next app, use proper written English, as that will be a requirement for you if you want to play on Lord of the Craft.

 

- Definitions are very vague. Please read up on the definitions located on our wiki.

 

- Lack of lore in your biography. Lore on the server can be found on our wiki.

 

- Personality and ambitions are quite short and vague.

 

- Your skills are way to short and vague.

 

- Everyone is weak to wolves and swords, think of a real internal weakness.

 

You also did not wait 24 hours before re-applying.

 

Doing this again may result in a ban from applying.

 

You may re-apply in 24 hours from now. Please PM me if you have any questions at all.

[Daisy 9739]

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