[Denied]Datgreekboy's Application

[Ulfric Greyhame 46]

Out-Of-Character Information

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - DatGreekBoy
How old are you?: - 17
Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - I'm roleplaying for more than 2 years and started from Mythcraft
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - I have, but it was long ago and sadly it seems deleted

How did you hear about us?: - I was searching for an RPG server from PMC and found you
What do you think the server will be like? - The server looks like Lord of the rings but with custom map and custom lore which look pretty nice to me
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - I agree with all the rules
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - No racism
Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- I understand the combat rules but i dont wish to RP as villain
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- I understand all rules

Definitions

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: - RolePlay is, when you have your character which he has his own role and missions.

What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is when you have information such as someone else's name without told in IC

What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is more like when you have permissions from another role such as the keys for a door and you use these keys with another role

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - Erodion

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - I would like to be a man, from the third empire of Oren

What gender are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - He is 25

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - He and his family, were living in a village not far away from the city named Al Khazar. Unfortunately while he was 18 Orc at the night decided to raid villages while the men and women were sleeping and had no idea about what the orcs were doing. The orcs have razed the village only Erodion and his little sister and they have survived because their parents have woke up by the screams of the rest people and managed to hide them under their beds. When they went out they noticed that some orcs were outside, so Erodion took his father's blade and managed to gain some skills by that small fight and saved his sister. Years have passed and he became an excelent swordsman with the knowledge of the bow too

What are they like? (personality): - Smart, agreessive due to his past.

What are their ambitions?: - He has read enough books, he knows a lot of stuff such as how to use flowers to heal someone from sickness and more.

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - He is a fine swordsman, he also has a small experience with his bow. Sadly his aim is not that good. Most of the time is agressive due to his past and that will cause him into many troubles.

Give us a description of how they look?: - Tall about 1,87 meters, long hair and short beard and the colour is light-brown

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - The skin will be a medieval one with the look i said before.


Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

-Denied.

 

-You need to expand upon your meta-gaming definition.

 

-Your powergaming definition is bluntly wrong.

 

-Your biography is filled with typos and errors.

 

-Having one's parents killed by orcs is extremely cliche and overused.

 

-Your biography is much too short.

 

-You need to expand upon your character's description, personality, ambitions, strengths, and weaknesses.

 

- 1.87 meters is much too tall for a dwarf.

 

-You need to ACTUALLY INCLUDE A MINECRAFT SKIN.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

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