[Denied]Application - Ulthrain (Palmtree219)

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Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Palmtree219

How old are you?: - 18

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - No.  I've played an anonymous anarchist on a friend's server, however, sowing the seeds of a small war while retaining my innocence.  

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No. 

 

How did you hear about us?: - Friends (deedle113)

What do you think the server will be like? - Deep and engrossing, hopefully with political intrigue and wars.  

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes. 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - The Building/destruction rules. 

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes.  

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- No. 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: - Playing as a character within a fictional world.  

 

What’s metagaming?: - Making decisions based on information gained ooc.  

 

What’s powergaming?: - Performing an rp action that cannot be reacted to fairly.  

 

In-Character Information

 

What’s your character called?: - Ulthrain. 

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Dwarf (Mountain)

 

What gender are they?: - Male

 

How old are they?: - 105

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -  

 

         (Note- this ties in with the application of Ulraen Irolkon. User name Arkay)

 

            Ulthrain, born a member of the Irolkon clan, had shown no signs of being different upon his birth.   Nor did any signs appear as he grew. He was a normal dwarf, short, stout, long black hair, and long black beard.  But he was different.  For generations, within the Irolkon family was born a justiciar, a bringer of justice, who's sole purpose was to root out corruption within the clan in order to make it stronger. This task was given at birth, and kept a secret from all the clan.   For the first 100 years of his life, Ulthrain worked as the apprentice of the past generation's justiciar, preparing to take his place.  The training he went through was harsh; starved for weeks, forced to fight trolls and other such creatures, tutored in the arts of stealth and combat.   By the age of 105, Ulthrain was ready to take his master's place.  And take his place, he did, as his master was soon after ambushed by an Orc warband, and slain.  As he perished, Ulthrain took up the mantel of justiciar and began his legacy by hunting down the band that killed his master.   Over the next month, he repeatedly struck the band with quick attacks, fading back into the darkness and hiding deep within caves while the orcs searched for their tormentor.  By the end of the month, there was but a handful of orcs left, and they were quickly drawing closer to the lines of the Battle of Storm's crossing.  Curious, Ulthrain followed the orcs as they moved behind the dwarven lines, and came to a stop at a blacksmith's tent.  Ulthrain waited just outside as the orcs struck up and argument with the dwarf within.  The leader of the war band accused the dwarf of setting them up.  Leading them to a hidden arms stash, but then telling dwarven warriors where they were.  The man quickly defended himself, saying that he did no such thing, but it was not his words that shocked Ulthrain, it was his voice.  For, the voice he heard, was that of his father.  Drawing his axe, Ulthrain prepared to rush in and slay the orcs, but stopped when he heard Karud Bar's next words.. "That dwarf ye saw there was on to me. If ye didn't kill'em, he woulda chopped ma 'ead off." Ulthrain's mind went into overdrive, and the rest of the argument was lost on him.  He knew that his master was hunting for the identity of a corrupt dwarf within the city.  One that was supplying dwarven steel to the Orcs which have been pillaging the countryside.   But his own father? Ulthrain could barely contain his rage.  Running in, he quickly dispatched the orcs, taken by surprise as they were, and challenged his father to a duel to the death.  The duel lasted mere moments, as Karud Bar was too shocked by his son's arrival to put up much of a fight.  As a last touch, Ulthrain took the orc leader's dagger and stuck it in Karud Bar's stomach.  Upon removing it, he placed it within the dead orc's hand, framing him.  With the deed done, and Karud Bar laying in his own blood, Ulthrain fled, his grief too much for even the fact of restoring his family's honor to comfort him.  A week later, he returned to Kal'azgoth, and prepared to receive the news of his father's brutal murder from his two unknowing brothers.  

 

What are they like? (personality): - Ulthrain is a very determined individual. He is willing to do whatever it takes to protect the clan from enemies both outside and within.  Occasionally he will show signs of deep grief due to the death of his father, but those moments are quickly replaced by a fanatical sheen in his eyes, showing his willingness to do anything to destroy the corruption which threatens to destroy the dwarven nation.  He is generally antisocial, but will behave friendly or outgoing if the situation calls for it. 

 

What are their ambitions?: - Ulthrain's life is fueled by the singular goal of destroying all those dwarves who have been corrupted by greed and power.   He wishes only to protect his clan, and possibly all the other clans as well, by fulfilling this task.  

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): -  Ulthrain was trained as a justiciar of clan Irolkon.  Thus, he is very skilled with all manner of weapons, as well as has basic stealth and political training.  However, he knows nothing of farming, fishing, smithing, or cooking.  Ulthrain tends to be a bit paranoid due to his father's betrayal, and thus finds it hard to put his trust in others.  While training with his master, he saw many great dwarven holds, and has the theoretical knowledge on how to build such great holds.   

 

Give us a description of how they look?: - A stout creature, slightly taller than his brethren, Ulthrain has long black hair and a long black beard which ends in two thick, braided strands.  He wears ancestral chainmail, which, due to it's age, no longer provides protection from blows, but helps him to feel closer with past justiciars, and keeps him focused on his task.   He wears brown hide pants, and has no sleeves to his chainmail shirt, as they degraded many years ago.  He has a single dark brown eye. His other is a milky white, caused by the slash of an Orc sword, which left a long scar running from the top left of his face, over his left eye and nose, and ending beneath the right eye.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Under review

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Denied for a few reasons:

-Story is slightly cliche with the "orcs killed my mentor and I will kill them easily" cliche

-Definitions need to be expanded, especially the power gaming one

-Include TWO cities, and at least two other races besides dwarf

-Try to balance your combat skills, he can't be amazing at all weapons but still good at stealth and diplomacy

-PM me with any more questions

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