[Denied]Joel Application

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What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - joel69412

How old are you?: -16

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: - No

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): - No

How did you hear about us?: -Through a friend

What do you think the server will be like? - A fun new experience

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - No damaging other peoples property for no reason

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- No

What is roleplaying?: - Taking on the role of a persona and creating a story with other players

What’s metagaming?: - The use of knowledge that a player has but the character doesn't

What’s powergaming?: - Making them win instantly in RP battles, and overpowered

What’s your character called?: - Bexter Iregut

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - Mountain Dwarf

What gender are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 305

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -

Bexter is a former resident of Oren, but was forced to leave when tensions started to rise between the Dwarves and the humans, to a remote village in the middle of a jungle called HolHivern. Bexter made ends meat by selling the finest meat in all of the land along with freshly baked bread. Bexter would often fight with the human children as a young Dwarf, as he was often mistreated because of his race. He would usually win because of his awesome strength. His mother was a travelling performer and his father was an unemployed beggar, with an addiction to ale. He seeks to make money as when he was younger he had very little. Bexter does have a good heart, he is kind and helpful towards others regardless of race because his mother was always insistant of this when he was being raised as a child. He is however a littl weary of the Orc race, as he was recently mugged by some Orcs whilst travelling to the cloud temple.

What are they like? (personality): - He is friendly, talkative and is actively ready to help out others. He is however not able to back down from a fight because of his constant fighting when he was younger.

What are their ambitions?: - To become a very wealthy and influential part of Dwarven society, as he has never really had a huge amount of money.

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - He is slow and cannot jump far, however he is strong and cunning

Give us a description of how they look?: - He has ginger hair, and a fierce beard

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: -

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/3601891/irish-viking-v2/

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Pending. Please take following points to note and try to improve them:

 

1. Redefine powergaming. Definition is incorrect.

2. Extend biography, make personality, ambitions and skills relate with his story background.

 

You have 24 hours to make above mentioned adjustments. If you put in enough effort and it looks alright, I am willing to accept you ;)

 

If you have done so, feel free to notify me.

 

 

 

You unfortunately did not meet my requirements. The biography has not been extended sufficiently. Please re-apply in 24 hours.

 

(A little hint of advise for it, your character is supposed to be 305 years old, perhaps he experienced a bit more in his life.)

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