HardstyleRaver2 56 Share Posted September 19, 2014 It's WIP at the moment. Alakagh (My main character that is currently the only character I play as) Name: Alakagh Uuthlini (Originally, Alakagh Godeval) Nicknames: Alak Age: 52 Gender: Male Race: Dark Elf (Mali'ker) Status: AliveDescription Height: 6'1" Weight: 160 Body Type: Muscular Eyes: Blue Hair: Originally white but now it's been dyed dark blue Skin: Dark grayish Markings/Tattoos: A scar is located at the back of his right knee. Another scar, which is in a form of a large bite mark, could be found at his right shoulder. Health: He's well. Personality: He is protective to his non-criminal kin. He takes joy in torturing criminals in captivity because he believes this method will teach them a lesson. He is friendly with his kin, wood elves, Druids, most humans who aren't from Oren, Kharajyr, halflings, and dwarves. He is hesitant in certain situations. He is militant and slightly aggressive. He loves to drink ale. Inventory: Armor from the Ivory Order; longsword in a scabbard, which is attached at his left of his waist; a kite shield on his back; a crossbow with a cranequin; a quiver filled with bolts, which is attached to the right of his waist; a piece of cloth to clean his blades; a dirk in its sheath, which is attached behind his right leg; he usually carries a voulge, which is a polearm; bag of minas; sack of food; iron shackles; 2 sapphire gems.Life Style Alignment*: Neutral Good Deity*: The Ancestors, Tahariae Religion: Ancestry Alliance/Nation/Home: Vassal State of Ker'nor in the Kingdom of Oren Job/Class: Soldier Title(s): Ordinator (The Archons) Former Title(s): Haler'tir (Ivory Order); Arbiter/Riv'tahu (Commander of eldiv'cruan); Guardian (Order of the Red Stallions) Profession(s): Miner Special Skill(s): Swordsmanship. Hobby: Sword collecting Flaw(s): He's slightly arrogant. He's ignorant about magic. He can hold grudges for a long time against those who harm him. He severely dislikes mindmancy and any magic that lets the caster either speaks to him telepathically or whispers into his ear without him seeing the whisperer. He is somewhat aggressive and short tempered.Weaponry Fighting Style: Usually uses a longsword and shield if the opponent is wearing chain-mail or plated armor. Trained Weapon: Longsword, shamsir, pesh-kabz, spontoon Favored Weapon: Longsword Archery: He is very inaccurate with a longbow and shortbow. However, he can be accurate with a crossbow in medium to short ranges, since it's easy to use and aim.Biography Parents: Altonas and T'rissace Siblings: None Children: None Extended Family: Pet(s): NoneHistory The Godeval family was humble. The parents of Alakagh gave birth to him in DarkHaven. T’rissace is the mother of Alakagh, and Altonas is the father of Alakagh. Alakagh has no siblings. The Godeval family supports the Conclave. Altonas retired from the Kyorel, which was DarkHaven's military force. Before he was retired, most of the soldiers, who saw him in action, praised his swordsmanship. T'rissace owned a bakery, and she earned a decent amount of minas per day, which was barely enough to pay for the expenses of the small house in which the family was living in. The cookies were her specialty. He had a childhood friend, who is named Kronafein Arabafin. They met each other when the Kronafein's family moved next door to Alakagh's family, when Alakagh was 6. They play games together and talk about their lives for 8 years. When Alakagh was 14, Altonas noticed that some of their minas earned from the bakery shop were missing. He investigated and caught Kronafein in the act of stealing. Because of Kronafein's action, Alakagh distrusted him and never spoke with him ever since.When Alakagh was 17, Altonas taught his son about sword combat and encouraged him to join the Conclave military. Alakagh doesn't feel that he was ready to join the military yet.During the end of Anthos, the Godeval family was told to evacuate to the Fringe. After they left, they were ambushed by the Scourge. T’rissace died as an arrow pierced against her back first at the start of the ambush. Altonas knew he and Alakagh were greatly outnumbered, so he had to make a decision. If they both fled together, then the Scourge will catch up to them and kill them both. Fighting together isn’t an option because they were outnumbered. Altonas decided to tell Alakagh to leave, while he could hold them off as long as he can for Alakagh’s safety. Still shedding tears for his dead mother, he was hesitant and wanted to fight with his father; however, he finally followed his father’s orders and left his father behind. He grieved as he traveled to the Door of Eternity and watched it closed from a distance as he was in the Fringe. After 3 years of traveling in the Fringe, he was ignorant about Oren and their treatment of dark elves, so he was heading off to an Oren city. Luckily, a human walked up to him and warned him about how the city treated dark elves. The human invited him to come to Vekaro, and Alakagh gladly accepted it. However, Vekaro was also an Orenian town, and Alakagh discovered that fact when he was in Athera. In the present, he doesn't know how he was not executed diring his time in Vekaro. During Alakagh's short sojourn in Vekaro, the human and Alakagh went into the town's tavern and had a conversation about each other. A desperate human woman cried out a proposal to him, but he immediately rejected it because he didn't know her at all and felt that he's too young for any marriages. Then, they left the tavern, and the human gave him a house without any need of down payment; however, he needed to pay taxes for every elven week he stayed. The human gave him a tour of the city. During the tour, the human offered some jobs to Alakagh. He told the human that he could work in the military for the city and be a miner. The human thought it was a good idea, so he decided to tell Alakagh that he would get these two jobs in a couple of elven days. After the tour, the human left Alakagh with another human. This human took him to a nearby church and made him swore an oath. Alakagh was uncomfortable when the human tried to teach him about the human's religion. After he left Vekaro due to a raid from the dwarves, he went passed the capital of Haelun'or, which is located just outside of Vekaro, without realizing it, and he was walking around outside of the dwarven capital. This is where he met a Northerner named Ragnar. Ragnar approached Alakagh, wanting him to join the Order of the Red Stallions, which was a guard force for a trading town named Atgaard. Alakagh, feeling that he's alone once again, agreed to join the Red Stallions and followed Ragnar to Atgaard. In Atgaard, there were several interesting characters. Lord Powell was no exception. Because he's an elf that looks like a human, Alakagh had mistaken him as a human. Lord Powell had an adopted spoiled brat name Catrina. She tend to like to disobey Alakagh and other members of the Red Stallion. A female dark elf named Lionna Swiftgale was an ex-pirate from Alras. However, Alakagh didn't know that she was a pirate; he only knew that she sailed on seas. She was significantly older than him. Sol was a mage elf, who preferred a bow over sword. Ragnar personally trained Alakagh and Sol, so they can be ready to fight any bandits. Since he received sword training from a different person, he learned more of how to use a longsword. (WIP) One day, the Red Stallions chased some bandits to a city of Oren. In the midst of confusion, he was left behind. Panicking because of being left behind, he pulled out his soulstone for the first time, and he wanted to use it to get back to Atgaard; however, the soulstone made him travel to outside of the Silver Walls of Tahn'soil. He quickly looked around his surroundings, confused to see that he is nowhere near to Atgaard. Then, he saw a sign. It said, "Ker'lomi - The Home of Dark Elves." He was more than contented after he read the sign, knowing that he could live with his kin once again. He approached to the gates of the district. The first portcullis lifted in front of him, and he walked in with the porticullis closed behind him. Z'ress Ousanna stood in the guard house and asked Alakagh some questions about him. Alakagh gladly answered her questions, including the one about his purity. His weapons were confiscated because the law indicated that outsiders can't bring weapons to Ker'lomi. The second porticullis lifted, and he stepped in Ker'lomi. He was given a house, free of charge and free of rent. He was living among his kin once again. Before eldiv'cruan, which was now a military force for Ker'lomi, was formed, Alakagh took trips between Ker'lomi, where he called home, and Atgaard, where he works. However, this was short lived as Jiub founded eldiv'cruan. Alakagh had to make a tough decision as he was recently promoted as Guardian and took an oath for the Red Stallions. Although, he felt obliged to defend his kin from any harm that came to them, so he decided to not return to Atgaard and joined eldiv'cruan. He was a Fi'taliiyna for several years, until he was promoted to Ihnsil'ikur after Annil'sul was built in Athera. Before Alakagh joined eldiv'cruan, he met a female named Tyri, who was illiterate and didn't know how to write. He helped her to fill out an application for citizenship. She later joined a clan called Uuthlini, which was headed by Veldryn, and dyed her hair blue. Feeling alone and quite fond of her, he joined Uuthlini and dyed his hair as well. While he was in eldiv'cruan, he was given a spontoon, a shamshir, a pesh-kabz, and the training for these weapons. Ever since, he preferred to use a shamshir more than a longsword. He was given tasks to patrol around the district and operate the gates. He almost lost his life to a dire wolf, while guarding Ker'lomi. The wolf sneaked behind Alakagh and tackled him. As he tried to reach for his shamshir, the wolf bit his right shoulder, preventing him from reaching his blade. (WIP) The drought came, and it forced the Desendents out of the Fringe. They had arrived in Thales. The newly formed capital of Haelun'or was forced to defend itself from the raids from orcs and bandits. This was the time when he saw the incredible strength from orcs and became frightened of orcs. In the Ker'lomi in Thales, he had met Aunrae Isttel. He loved to look at her, since she was beautiful. He had some conversations with her, and he playfully sparred with her. One day, it was a down pour. Lightning striked down very frequently. A nasty squall found its way over Haelun'or. Alakagh winced as he heard a loud thunder. Then, Aunrae approached with severe burns to Alakagh. She uttered, "Lightning." Then, she faceplanted into the wet ground. Alakagh quickly picked her up and rushed to Ker'lomi. He tried to find Yriel, who was the physician, but he couldn't find him. He attempted to tend her wounds, but his attempts alone were not enough. He quickly seek for some assistance and saw Dak'ir around in Ker'lomi's square. Dak'ir told him that he could get the Druids from the Druidic Grove to help her. He traveled urgently to the Grove, which was near the Cloud Temple. Luckily, there were a couple of Druids that were able to heal burns and were willingly to help, and Alakagh returned to Ker'lomi with them following him. After a long operation, the two Druids saved Aunrae from the clutches of death. Then, they advised Alakagh to take care of her, until she was well enough to do her normal activities. He was more than willingly to take care of her. One day, Alakagh received an anonymous letter from a person who claimed to be his friend. The writer of this letter wanted Alakagh to meet with him at his keep. Alakagh replied the message, asking who the writer was. After a series of exhanged messages, Alakagh decided to bring his weapons for self-defense and went to the rendezvous. As Alakagh enters the keep, he looked around for any sign of a trap, but he couldn't see any. He called for the person to reveal himself, and he was in complete surprise when he saw Ragnar approached him. Alakagh immediately accused Ragnar of his possible death because Alakagh abandoned the Order of the Red Stallions to join eldiv'cruan. Alakagh braced himself for a possible ambush by placing his hand on the hilt of his sheathed shamshir. Then, Ragnar responded to him that the order was no more and that he wanted to meet his old friend. Alakagh eased his hand from the hilt, flustered by the fate of the order. Then, they had a conversation about each other's past. Alakagh was surprised when he learned that recent events had turned sour for Ragnar. (WIP) Then, a winter didn't seem to want to end on Thales. The citizens of Haelun'or were been told to go to Tuv Aviv, which had boats prepared for them to leave from Thales. As Alakagh was walking out of Haelun'or, he stumbled upon an Uruk. Fearing of being robbed and murdered, he shuddered and try to keep his distance away from the Uruk; however, the Uruk approached him and asked for directions to the Cloud Temple. Fearing of dying if he didn't help the Uruk, he lead the Uruk to the Cloud Temple, hoping that he would not get back stabbed. After they arrived at the Cloud Temple, the Uruk preceded to headbutt Alakagh, knocking him out of conscious. Then, he waked up, seeing two Uruks having a conversation. One of them looked like as if his face was torn off, revealing his skull. This Uruk was grotesque. The Uruk picked him up and carried him on the shoulders before Alakagh had time to react. Unable to reach his sword, he tried to wiggle his way out of the Uruk, but the Uruk was too strong. As they left the Cloud Temple, Alakagh called for help, but almost everyone ignored him as if there were oblivious to his likely peril. However, Ragnar happened to be around the Sanctuary at the time and responded to Alakagh's plea for help. Ragnar had tried to stop them, but they completely ignored him and continue to haul Alakagh. Ragnar tried to organize his own friends to rescue Alakagh; however, the Uruks were already out of sight, and he had no clue where they went. Alakagh felt even more helpless and felt that his peril was coming soon. Then, they arrived at Tuv Aviv, which was Alakagh's intented destination, and dropped Alakagh off in the harbor in which the ships for evacuation were docked. Alakagh was extremely confused about the motives of Uruks. He started to wonder if they were not savages as they appeared to be and were just misunderstood. The descendent races sailed to Athera. During the construction of Annil'sul in Haelun'or, a "mali'valah" named Price assaulted Alakagh with a stick and demanded money from him. At the time, Alakagh, wearing armor, was in bed to recover from his dehydration. He called for backup, and the "mali'valah" fled from the scene. After the construction of Annil'sul, he was approached by a wood elf, who was wearing a pumpkin of his head and was followed by Price. The wood elf accused Alakagh of adultery with his wife and started to fight him. During the fight, the wood elf told to Alakagh that he was fighting him for Price, and Price stabbed Alakagh in the back of his knee. Alakagh squealed in pain, bringing attention of the citizens in the city to him, and the two criminals fled. He was rushed to a bakery in Ker'lomi because the infimary wasn't built yet. Then, Alakagh received an extremely painful treatment from Yriel, so he won't lose his leg. After the treatment, he was taken to bed to rest. After his rest, he woke up, swearing that he will torture Price for the pain in which he went through. However, Price was never seen again. In order to become a better fighter, he privately trained in a cave for elven weeks. To increase his stamina, speed, and agility, he ran laps in the cave with boulders as the obstacles. He slashes at logs to see what possible cuts he can do. To increase his strength, he frequently does push-ups, sit-ups, and pull-ups by using wooden poles sticking out of the stalactites. In 1475, Alakagh returned to Annil'sul only to find out that Phaedrus declared a state of marshal law, the mali'aheral of the Silver Law being purged, and Dak'ir declared Ker'lomi to be neutral of the situation. Alakagh was worried about a possible attack from Oren. When Aesterwald, the Uruks of the War Nation, and Urguan came to assist Phaedrus in breaking into the high elven district, Iblees's Undead forces attacked them. The Undead forces were defeated in battle, and Phaedrus and the nations that supported him discovered that the high elves had already fled from Annil'sul. Later, Ker'lomi lost its neutrality and was allied with Phaedrus. Annil'sul was no longer the capital of Haelun'or; it became the capital of an egalitarian military state, the State of Laureh'lin. Before the first election occurred, Dak'ir promoted Alakagh from Ihnsil'ikur to Riv'tahu, which was commander rank that was later renamed to Arbiter. A group of radical dark elves formed Laurir'ker and threatened war against the State of Laureh'lin if their demands were not met. Some of their demands were the removal of dark elves from the caves of Ker'lomi and Haelun'or regaining control of Annil'sul. The Laurir'ker disliked the Uuthlini clan because of their tradition to dye their hairs blue. Phaedrus was missing, so a mali'ame named Artimec Camoryn negogiated the terms with the Laurir'ker, and he prevented an invasion from the orcs, Laurir'ker, Haelun'or, and Renatus. Haelun'or reclaimed Annil'sul as Laureh'lin started to build their new capital, Leyulin. Then, Annil'sul was destroyed due to a freak geologic occurance, which caused a plateau to be formed; therefore, the mali'aheral had to rebuild their city on the plateau. For quite some time, Alakagh was homeless before he decided to live in Leyulin. Alakagh joined the Ivory Order when it was founded by Artimec. (WIP) After being demonstrated by a war cleric, whose name was Jakor, of his clerical powers from an Aengul named Tahariae, Alakagh had an interest to become a war cleric and decided to join the Clerical Order after completing a couple of trials like feeding the needy and killing Undead beings. However, Jakir was disconnected after Alakagh completed his second trial, and this situation significantly delayed Alakagh's progress to become a war cleric as he was without a teacher for awhile. During his first trial, which was to feed the needy, Alakagh had given food to a female dark elf named Nesiaril. She immediately had a crush on him and flirted at him by teasing him. At first, he was embarrassed, but he started to like her assertiveness; therefore, he decided to take her on a few dates. (WIP) Alakagh, Dak'ir, Mizziyrn, high elves of Haelun'or, and some mercenaries went on an expedition to a dark elven ruin. During the expedition, they were assaulted by some creatures, but there were no casualties. When they arrived at the entrance of the ruins, they had to find a way to open a door, only open to a certain series of sentences in Common. After several tries, the door finally opened when Dak'ir spoke the correct series of sentences. The ruins were perilous because of the traps and a frustrating parkour room, but it didn't stop the most of the party from reaching a room with a giant mushroom in the center. However, Mizziyrn was chased out by spiders. There was a basin, which contains a water-like substance, behind the mushroom; a mirror was over the basin. When a person gazed upon the mirror, it would reflect one's younger self back to him. It was later discovered that you would lose your memories temporarily when you drank or touch the contents from the basin. It was speculated that someone needed to drink all of the contents. Alakagh volunteered first; however, he quickly pulled his hands out and temporarily forgot who he was and where he was. The second person to volunteer was Dak'ir, and it was quite a struggle for him to drink all of the contents. After it was done, a chest was revealed to the party. The chest contained 3 items; one was a gem, the second item was a very beautiful sword, which was powerful against the Undead, and the third artifact was an orb. Alakagh's greed had shown to others when he demanded the sword to be handed to him as he saw a high elf holding it. The sword and the orb were taken by Dak'ir and Alakagh as agreed to the expedition party, and the party left the ruins. After Dak'ir and Alakagh returned to Leyulin, they went inside of the dark elven temple, and Mizziyrn joined them. They had discovered the significance of the orb. If the orb was held, it would show the deceased loved ones to the person holding it. When Alakagh held it, he could his mother but not his father. That caused the shocking discovery, which Altonas was still alive and was out somewhere in Athera. He felt a need to find his father. After the expedition, Dak'ir decided to create a force called the Archons for the dark elves. Alakagh gladly joined the force, and he was immediately promoted to Ordinator, which was the second highest rank, because of his past services. As the conflict between State of Laureh'lin and Haelun'or grew, Alakagh hated the high elves of Haelun'or when they dropped dead bodies of innocent citizens of Laureh'lin from Haelun'or's plateau. He believed that they were dishonorable in breaking the peace treaty, and he felt that his home was threatened; therefore, he would take up arms against Haelun'or when the war between Laureh'lin and Haelun'or began. Years before the batte of Leyulin, every citizen of Leyulin was evacuated to Cerulin. Even after moving, the tensions between Haelun'or and Laureh'lin continue to rise, and war was inevitable. In the battle of Leyulin, Laureh'lin and Urguan forces went into an underground fort to defend themselves from the invading force. However, the defenses were thwarted, and the invading force declared victorious after the battle was over. Dak'ir decided that the dark elves should separate from Laureh'lin and form an independent city state named Ker'nor. Alakagh didn't like the idea of moving, but he was very loyal to Dak'ir; therefore, he went along with it. Alakagh didn't approve Dak'ir's decision to sign a document that made Ker'nor and Haelun'or joined together in a dominion. However, he quickly remembered that the Haelun'or has some of the dark elven artifacts, and the document promised the return of the artifacts to their rightful owner. Other: Sword Collection: Name: Ancient Sword of Sin'Gandor Description: Normal, but stylish looking sword with blue runes inside of the iron Image: How did he get it?: Veldryn gave Alakagh this sword Name: N/A Description: The blade would be made of a dark grey steel, obviously not the normal kind, with intricate lines in the metal, making the blade lighter, and the pommel being an obvious dwarven design. Its scabbard is made of dark leather. Image: How did he get it?: Demagol gave this sword to Alakagh. Dreams: The Tunnel Alakagh felt something hard and cool as he opened his eyes to the darkness that surrounded him. His lungs took in very stagnant air around the dark elf. His ebony ears heard only eerie silence. Upon discovery that he was lying on his stomach, he slowly exited from being prone to crouch with one knee on the ground. His blue eyes frantically moved in their eye sockets, searching for any sign of light. His heart broke the silence as his breaths became more frequent. He patted himself and discovered that he was only wearing rags, which he found it unusual. He started to wonder where he was and why he was here. He stretched his arms in front of him and slowly creeped forward. His palms contacted a hard, rough, cool surface. Then, he made an about face and creeped to that direction. Once again, his palms touched a similar surface. He began to realize that he's in an underground narrow tunnel. He assumed that it was deeper than Ker'lomi, his underground home district, due to the stagnant air. He cried, "Dak'ir!" Only the echoes in the corridor answered him. "Veldryn!" Still, only echoes returned his call. "Arveldir! Mizziyrn! Anyone?!" There were only echoes. He felt isolated. He stood up slowly, stretching his arms up to feel for the ceiling. The ceiling was about a foot higher than his head. Still facing against a wall of the corridor, he noticed that the tunnel appeared to be ascending to the right of him, so he decided to head that direction. Only his footsteps produced from his bare feet and his heart broke the silence. At first, the tunnel ascended; however, it descended deeper later. Therefore, he decided to turn on his heels to head back. Something scurried behind him. His heart raced as he quickly turned around to only see darkness. He turned back around and paced through the tunnel. He wondered if he's not alone in this litless tunnel. Sonething large scurried behind him. He felt a sharp pain on his right shoulder. It felt like as if a spear hit him from behind, so he screamed in agony and collapsed into the ground. He placed his hands on his wound and started to groan. He felt sticky, stringy substance all over his body. It took a moment to realize that he was being hunted by a guant spider, and it caught him. He struggled to get out, but the spider's silk is too strong. He cried for help, but it was only answered by echoes. He struggled once again, but his efforts were useless. Glowing red eyes faced down upon Alakagh. A cold, malevolent, feminine voice in an unknown language reached to Alakagh's ebony ears, and the giant spider fled away. Alakagh widened his eyes; his heart pounded loudly in his chest. The red eyes were slanted inwards, making them appeared hostile. He felt a sharp, stinging pain on his face, but it was far from the shoulder pain. Then, he heard the voice spoke directly at him. It sounded very threatening and sinister in which it belittled him. The unknown language sounded like elven to Alakagh, but he never heard any elves spoke like this voice, even high elves. "Dos phuul natha wael ka dos thalinth dos inbal do'bauthus da ussa!" Alakagh felt a painful jolt on his stomach. "Usstan zhal jiv'elgg dos, olarth darthiir, velkyn dos phlith ulu tlu dro! Dos phuul ussta wanre, lueth dos zhal zhaun ussta z'ress phor dos!" Suddenly, he felt numerous spiders crawled all over his body, biting him. He felt numb and tried to cry out, but all of his muscles ceased to move. He felt a cold sensation creeping all over his body. Alakagh woke up in his room, gasping for air. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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