[Denied]Spaz's Second App

[Xxspaz_addictxX 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Xxspaz_addictxX
How old are you?: - 15
Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: -  yes, Avalon Rise of Kings and Age of Adventure
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/116962-xxspazs-app/
 
How did you hear about us?: - Minecraftservers.org
What do you think the server will be like? - A role play experience and learning experience 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - 

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  Don’t leave floating leaves when cutting down trees! If you decide to cut down a tree, ensure that you do so fully, rather than leaving unappealing and unRP floating blocks behind.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- what is the emote for pvp
Definitions
 
These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: - Playing a role in something for enjoyment and to play a character you are not
 
What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game. Another definition refers to the game universe outside of the game itself.
In simple terms, it is the use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in-game decisions.
 
What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming (or power gaming) is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as (in video games, boardgames, and role-playing games) storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie. Due to its focus on the letter of the rules over the spirit of the rules, it is often seen as unsporting, un-fun, or unsociable. This behaviour is most often found in games with a wide range of game features, lengthy campaigns or prize tournaments such as massively multiplayer or collectible games.
In-Character Information
 
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
What’s your character called?: - Rhealoon Megalith
 
What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - 
Human, Northerner
 
What gender are they?: - Female
 
How old are they?: - 16
 
Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): - Born in anthos the new born human did not know of the past worlds or history. She was a very cute little girl. She lived  with her family her family was rather rich they owned many fancy dresses for her to wear. They lived in the nation of Oren. when she was 15 she sot out the great temple. she turned 16 and decided to go out on her own to explore.  
 
What are they like? (personality): - Flirty, Outgoing ,temptful
 
What are their ambitions?: - to have a family in the new realm
 
Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Can use her voice to make most of man weak, weakness is orcs and the feeling of worthless it makes her freak out 
 
Give us a description of how they look?: - Black fur sploshes with tan fur 
 
Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://mod-minecraft.net/pretty-flower-princess-skin/
 
 
Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

Sadly I must deny you for the following reasons

 

- Anthos was 40 years ago. You need to be older to be from anthos.

- You can not apply to be someone under 18, you were denied last time for this.

- Your bio is too short, make it at least 2 decent paragraphs

- You need to expand on personality, and ambitions

- Your description sounds more like a cat than a human, fix and make it a decent length

 

 You took your definitions straight from wikipedia. Plagerism is not acceptable. This will be your only warning. Next time you are caught copying anything, you will receive a ban from applying.

 

You may reapply 24 hours from this post. If you have any questions comments or concerns, feel free to send me a private message.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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