[Denied]Spaz's Third App

[Xxspaz_addictxX 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
 
The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - Xxspaz_addictxX
How old are you?: - 15
Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: -  yes, Avalon Rise of Kings(moderator on it) and Age of Adventure
Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): -  yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/116972-spazs-second-app/
 
How did you hear about us?: - Minecraftservers.org
What do you think the server will be like? - A role play experience and learning experience 
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: - 

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  Don’t leave floating leaves when cutting down trees! If you decide to cut down a tree, ensure that you do so fully, rather than leaving unappealing and unRP floating blocks behind.

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:- Yes
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):- what is the emote for pvp
Definitions
 
These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?: - Playing a role in something for enjoyment and to play a character you are not
 
What’s metagaming?: - Metagaming is any strategy or method of obtaining information used to gain an advantage of future events or roleplay that may add an advantage
 
What’s powergaming?: - Powergaming is when you make your character so it cant be defeated/killed or adds a unrealistic aspect you the character to gain an advantage. 
In-Character Information
 
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
What’s your character called?: - Rhealoon Megalith
 
What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): - 
Human, Northerner
 
What gender are they?: - Female
 
How old are they?: - 18
 
Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): -

    Born in Athera was a baby girl. As she grew up she did not know of the past realms or history as she was not educated in this aspect of school. She was a very cute little girl. She lived  with her family her family was rather rich they owned many fancy dresses for her to wear when she turned 18. They lived in the nation of Oren in the settlement of Aldersberg. Her father was a blacksmith and her mother was a seamstress. Her mother made the most elegant dresses in Aldersberg and her father made weapons for the military to fight off the enemy's and monsters. 

 

  When she was 18 she pick one of her mothers finest dresses made of silk, it was red with a leather corset which made her feel very skinny with the tight corset.  She sot out the cloud temple to gain some knowledge about her ancestors and the history of Athera. Later after she left home her parents got grish from poorly cooked meat and died. She visited all of the races gaining there strengths and weaknesses. She found her passion of battle strategy while visiting the races. After gaining the knowledge of her ancestors and the history of Athera and the realm, she set out to put her own mark on history and to gain some new friends to help her in the journey. 
 
What are they like? (personality): - Rhealoon is a very tempful and flirty person that likes to flirt to get her way. She has a great skill to in talk others into giving her what she wants. She enjoys battle strategy 
 
What are their ambitions?: - Her ambitions was to have a family in the realm of Athera. Also to become  a great battle strategist and have children with a nice and charming man.
 
Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): - Can use her voice to make most of man weak, she is also rather strong. Her weakness is orcs, she cant persuade them to do what she wants and another is the kharajyr, she thinks they are so cute it makes her voice weak.

Give us a description of how they look?: - she was white with brown eyes and hair that went down to her waist with black eye brows she was only 5' 6".
 
Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - http://gyazo.com/90374a53a3162ef1b5272aa003a98d40
 
 
Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

​(I am not the best of writer but i tried) 

[MamaBearJade 2090]

 

 

Alright you made some changes since I last reviewed your app. You did better but these need to be changed.

 

- Athera is barely 7 years old. We have not been in athera long, Look into Fringe places.

- You still need lore

- Your special skill is to be a siren to men. Remove that please. No female is able to persuade men by voice, not even frost witches.

- Orcs and Kha are not weaknesses. Find something more sound.

- Your description is very short

- You need to include all past denials, not just one

 

You may apply 24 hours from this post. If you have any questions comments or concerns feel free to send me a private message.

[MamaBearJade 2090]

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