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Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Moe_Le_Stare

How old are you?: 23

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Metagaming and Powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Overheard the name mentioned on a different RP server

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Acting as a role or character

What is metagaming?: Using information gained OOC for the gain or benefit of your character 

What is powergaming?: Performing an action that does not allow others to respond


In-Character Information 

Character’s name: Mervynn Finnley

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 24

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

Mervynn was born in a small village to a loving mother and a father that was a thief. After his father was chased out of the village for stealing bread, Mervynn grew up poor and had to quickly learn how to hunt to get food for his mother and younger sister. 

 

After his mother aged and died and his sister went off to better how own life in a larger town, Mervynn decided to leave his small home and travel. He has been travelling since he was 20 and is now looking for a place to call his home and where he can start a family of his own. 

Personality Traits: Honorable, quiet, sticks up for others in trouble

Ambitions: Wants to earn an honest wage and meet a nice girl to start a family with

Strengths/Talents: Can hunt small animals, able to use a bow, learns new skills quickly.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Has little education

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Hair: Short, ragged

Hair Color: Brown with a hint of red

Eye Color: Black

Face: Beard covers most of the lower face 

Body Features: Broad Shoulders, Average Build

Height: 6 ft 2 in

Weight: 13 st

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): 

 

(Minecraft.net is down - so here is a link to my skin)

 

http://prntscr.com/50mz85

[Friendly Guy 223]

1. 6ft 2 is Large for a Human on LOTC consider making them smaller.

2. Your biography is short and lacks alot of lore.

3. Add more weakness's, Add things like "Can your character swim" "Character scared of heights"

[Friendly Guy 223]

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